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This Moonlit Night

On the balcony I stand this moonlit night Behind me she sleeps content within sight If I stand to my left, allowing the moons pass This lunar beam delights my beautiful lass Dark haired, tanned, amidst silken white sheets Two loves of my life in glowing right meet Open doors where I stand this moonlit night It's I whom she sees in the morn's first light

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/22/2015 6:03:00 PM

I love the mix of nature and romance in this wonderful piece James. A fav. for me. #7

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/21/2015 1:33:00 PM

You hit a home run with this sweet couplet my friend. A very solid 7 and enjoyed the imagery it evoked. Bravooooo!!!!!

James Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 2:16:00 PM

Thanks Robert, I so loved writing this poem. Thank you for blessing said write with your generosity, your poetry friend always, James :) :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2015 3:10:00 PM

Passonate and very descriptive..Enjoyed reading your couplets filled with romance. Thanks for stopping by ...Sara

James Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 2:10:00 PM

Love your visits Sara, always will, thank you, James :) x

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/14/2015 4:03:00 PM

Gorgeous, A Fav!

James Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 2:03:00 PM

Thank you so much Maurice, and for making it a Fav, I'm smiling widely, James :) :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2015 4:34:00 PM

lovely and romantic, James.

James Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 1:50:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, I always appreciated your comments, James :)x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/9/2015 12:57:00 AM

I can just beam with my widest smile to your poem.. :)!

James Fraser
Date: 1/11/2015 3:47:00 PM

Then a smile I have to witness one day Olive. Smiles back at you, James :)xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/8/2015 10:09:00 PM

Amazing expressions James!Hv a blessed year 2015!

James Fraser
Date: 1/11/2015 3:43:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Upma. My mind in wander again, James :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/8/2015 5:59:00 PM

James as romantic as the moonlight itself these words!WoW

James Fraser
Date: 1/11/2015 3:26:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine. I enjoyed writing this little poem, it makes me smile, James :) xx

Jan Allison

Date: 1/8/2015 4:30:00 PM

so tender and romantic James I love it can imagine myself there but I'm not dark hair or tanned lol but I can still dream :-) faves and 7 its lovely my friend:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 1/11/2015 3:05:00 PM

It's nice to dream Jan, and I think my mind is in constant dream mode, but I love it. Hugs for you this Sunday evening, James :) xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/8/2015 2:40:00 PM

Beautiful! :) White sheets make the scene so pure like the love in your heart and the glow of the moon. This made my lips smile :)

James Fraser
Date: 1/8/2015 2:51:00 PM

It's lovely to have ones poems read, more smiles when they're appreciated, James :) :)