James Fraser Poet Couplet

This Moonlit Night

On the balcony I stand this moonlit night
Behind me she sleeps content within sight

If I stand to my left, allowing the moons pass
This lunar beam delights my beautiful lass

Dark haired, tanned, amidst silken white sheets
Two loves of my life in glowing right meet

Open doors where I stand this moonlit night
It's I whom she sees in the morn's first light

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Connie Marcum Wong January 22, 2015 at 6:03 PM I love the mix of nature and romance in this wonderful piece James. A fav. for me. #7

Robert Lindley January 21, 2015 at 1:33 PM You hit a home run with this sweet couplet my friend. A very solid 7 and enjoyed the imagery it evoked. Bravooooo!!!!! James Fraser January 21, 2015 at 2:16 PM Thanks Robert, I so loved writing this poem. Thank you for blessing said write with your generosity, your poetry friend always, James :) :)

Sara Kendrick January 16, 2015 at 3:10 PM Passonate and very descriptive..Enjoyed reading your couplets filled with romance. Thanks for stopping by ...Sara James Fraser January 21, 2015 at 2:10 PM Love your visits Sara, always will, thank you, James :) x

Maurice Yvonne January 14, 2015 at 4:03 PM Gorgeous, A Fav! James Fraser January 21, 2015 at 2:03 PM Thank you so much Maurice, and for making it a Fav, I'm smiling widely, James :) :)

Andrea Dietrich January 11, 2015 at 4:34 PM lovely and romantic, James. James Fraser January 21, 2015 at 1:50 PM Thank you Andrea, I always appreciated your comments, James :)x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 9, 2015 at 12:57 AM I can just beam with my widest smile to your poem.. :)! James Fraser January 11, 2015 at 3:47 PM Then a smile I have to witness one day Olive. Smiles back at you, James :)xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 8, 2015 at 10:09 PM Amazing expressions James!Hv a blessed year 2015! James Fraser January 11, 2015 at 3:43 PM Thank you Dr. Upma. My mind in wander again, James :)

Charmaine Chircop January 8, 2015 at 5:59 PM James as romantic as the moonlight itself these words!WoW James Fraser January 11, 2015 at 3:26 PM Thank you Charmaine. I enjoyed writing this little poem, it makes me smile, James :) xx

Jan Allison January 8, 2015 at 4:30 PM so tender and romantic James I love it can imagine myself there but I'm not dark hair or tanned lol but I can still dream :-) faves and 7 its lovely my friend:-) hugs jan xx James Fraser January 11, 2015 at 3:05 PM It's nice to dream Jan, and I think my mind is in constant dream mode, but I love it. Hugs for you this Sunday evening, James :) xx

Casarah Nance January 8, 2015 at 2:40 PM Beautiful! :) White sheets make the scene so pure like the love in your heart and the glow of the moon. This made my lips smile :) James Fraser January 8, 2015 at 2:51 PM It's lovely to have ones poems read, more smiles when they're appreciated, James :) :)