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This Moonlit Night

On the balcony I stand this moonlit night
Behind me she sleeps content within sight

If I stand to my left, allowing the moons pass
This lunar beam delights my beautiful lass

Dark haired, tanned, amidst silken white sheets
Two loves of my life in glowing right meet

Open doors where I stand this moonlit night
It's I whom she sees in the morn's first light

Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/22/2015 6:03:00 PM I love the mix of nature and romance in this wonderful piece James. A fav. for me. #7 Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 1/21/2015 1:33:00 PM You hit a home run with this sweet couplet my friend. A very solid 7 and enjoyed the imagery it evoked. Bravooooo!!!!! Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/21/2015 2:16:00 PM Thanks Robert, I so loved writing this poem. Thank you for blessing said write with your generosity, your poetry friend always, James :) :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/16/2015 3:10:00 PM Passonate and very descriptive..Enjoyed reading your couplets filled with romance. Thanks for stopping by ...Sara Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/21/2015 2:10:00 PM Love your visits Sara, always will, thank you, James :) x

Maurice Yvonne Date: 1/14/2015 4:03:00 PM Gorgeous, A Fav! Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/21/2015 2:03:00 PM Thank you so much Maurice, and for making it a Fav, I'm smiling widely, James :) :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/11/2015 4:34:00 PM lovely and romantic, James. Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/21/2015 1:50:00 PM Thank you Andrea, I always appreciated your comments, James :)x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/9/2015 12:57:00 AM I can just beam with my widest smile to your poem.. :)! Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/11/2015 3:47:00 PM Then a smile I have to witness one day Olive. Smiles back at you, James :)xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 1/8/2015 10:09:00 PM Amazing expressions James!Hv a blessed year 2015! Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/11/2015 3:43:00 PM Thank you Dr. Upma. My mind in wander again, James :)

Charmaine Chircop Date: 1/8/2015 5:59:00 PM James as romantic as the moonlight itself these words!WoW Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/11/2015 3:26:00 PM Thank you Charmaine. I enjoyed writing this little poem, it makes me smile, James :) xx

Jan Allison Date: 1/8/2015 4:30:00 PM so tender and romantic James I love it can imagine myself there but I'm not dark hair or tanned lol but I can still dream :-) faves and 7 its lovely my friend:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/11/2015 3:05:00 PM It's nice to dream Jan, and I think my mind is in constant dream mode, but I love it. Hugs for you this Sunday evening, James :) xx

Casarah Nance Date: 1/8/2015 2:40:00 PM Beautiful! :) White sheets make the scene so pure like the love in your heart and the glow of the moon. This made my lips smile :) Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/8/2015 2:51:00 PM It's lovely to have ones poems read, more smiles when they're appreciated, James :) :)