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This Man's Creed

Oh my God! Am I ever sorry I may have even forgotten your story I ask of you to beg my pardon Again I've eaten from the garden The fruit is good and hard to detest That's no excuse I took the best For that your punishment without refute Out of the garden I get the boot I know your son did some suffering Insulted both with all my buffering God! Here I am begging your grace Help me be a good man in this place I'm going to promise never again You've heard it before so I'll refrain Simply show me the right path I truly fear thy mighty wrath. Amen 8/17/16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2016 6:27:00 PM

I see you scored really well with your prayer poem. BIG congrats, Ronald.

Ronald Kent
Date: 8/20/2016 7:46:00 PM

I am in good company with this one. Thank you.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/20/2016 4:17:00 PM

Ronald, splendidly written my friend! Kudos on your wonderful win! : ) 7

Ronald Kent
Date: 8/20/2016 7:48:00 PM

Thank you once again Connie.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/18/2016 11:49:00 PM

Where there is love there is peace! A beautiful prayer Ronld! Congratulations on your first placement! 7 ; )

Ronald Kent
Date: 8/19/2016 6:17:00 AM

Thank you for reading it Connie.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/18/2016 10:36:00 PM

Congrats!!! Ronald my friend on placing...great first timer lol...god bless...^WW^

Ronald Kent
Date: 8/19/2016 6:14:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by and commenting WW, for you as well.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/18/2016 3:55:00 PM

Ronald, beautiful prayer dear man..God bless...congrats on your well deserved top placement :)-luloo

Ronald Kent
Date: 8/18/2016 5:41:00 PM

Thank you for commenting. #one with the big guy today and in good company as well.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/18/2016 2:44:00 PM

Thank you so very much for such an inspiring prayer, Ronald, we all have those times that we are too busy with other things, but that is human. But like a parent he never turns His back on us. Hugs Eve

Ronald Kent
Date: 8/18/2016 5:39:00 PM

I never would have thought that I would have written a prayer. I appreciate the prompt, felt good.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/18/2016 8:40:00 AM

If you keep your promise the Lord certainly delighted would be from the garden you not to evict my friend, Ronald! A beautiful prayer, delightfully written! A 7!

Ronald Kent
Date: 8/18/2016 5:44:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios, I appreciate you kind comments.