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This Man's Creed

Oh my God! Am I ever sorry
I may have even forgotten your story
I ask of you to beg my pardon
Again I've eaten from the garden

The fruit is good and hard to detest
That's no excuse I took the best
For that your punishment without refute
Out of the garden I get the boot

I know your son did some suffering
Insulted both with all my buffering
God! Here I am begging your grace
Help me be a good man in this place

I'm going to promise never again
You've heard it before so I'll refrain
Simply show me the right path
I truly fear thy mighty wrath.

Amen

8/17/16

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/20/2016 6:27:00 PM I see you scored really well with your prayer poem. BIG congrats, Ronald. Login to Reply Ronald Kent Date: 8/20/2016 7:46:00 PM I am in good company with this one. Thank you.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/20/2016 4:17:00 PM Ronald, splendidly written my friend! Kudos on your wonderful win! : ) 7 Login to Reply Ronald Kent Date: 8/20/2016 7:48:00 PM Thank you once again Connie.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/18/2016 11:49:00 PM Where there is love there is peace! A beautiful prayer Ronld! Congratulations on your first placement! 7 ; ) Login to Reply Ronald Kent Date: 8/19/2016 6:17:00 AM Thank you for reading it Connie.

Winged Warrior Date: 8/18/2016 10:36:00 PM Congrats!!! Ronald my friend on placing...great first timer lol...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply Ronald Kent Date: 8/19/2016 6:14:00 AM Thanks for stopping by and commenting WW, for you as well.

Beautiful Scars Date: 8/18/2016 3:55:00 PM Ronald, beautiful prayer dear man..God bless...congrats on your well deserved top placement :)-luloo Login to Reply Ronald Kent Date: 8/18/2016 5:41:00 PM Thank you for commenting. #one with the big guy today and in good company as well.

Eve Roper Date: 8/18/2016 2:44:00 PM Thank you so very much for such an inspiring prayer, Ronald, we all have those times that we are too busy with other things, but that is human. But like a parent he never turns His back on us. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Ronald Kent Date: 8/18/2016 5:39:00 PM I never would have thought that I would have written a prayer. I appreciate the prompt, felt good.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/18/2016 8:40:00 AM If you keep your promise the Lord certainly delighted would be from the garden you not to evict my friend, Ronald! A beautiful prayer, delightfully written! A 7! Login to Reply Ronald Kent Date: 8/18/2016 5:44:00 PM Thank you Demetrios, I appreciate you kind comments.