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This Love Is Etched In My Soul

To gaze at you makes me weak in the knees Your breath upon my neck gives me a rush You tantalize me as you toy and tease Those dark eyes framed with lashes long and lush A body pressed to mine that makes me blush I long to keep you oh so close to me To taste the nectar of your lingering kiss Just rock me in your arms and set me free I want to live my life wrapped up like this Enraptured by you baby,filled with bliss Washed away upon this sea of love Hoping that we never reach the shore Time is standing still for us,my dove I know that this is what I've waited for No matter what I couldn't love you more! ** for contest "Make Me Swoon" sponsored by Francine Roberts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/25/2011 3:20:00 PM
WHOOO HOOO, very nice, Deb. Love that washed away to sea of love hoping not to come back with the tide. Awesome win.
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Date: 3/25/2011 5:32:00 AM
Nice going, Deb. Congrats on a well written, well deserved 1st Place win. Beautiful job. Kudos to you. xxxRalph
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Date: 3/24/2011 9:25:00 PM
You've really made me swoon with this entry. Many congrats dear friend.
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Date: 3/24/2011 6:25:00 PM
Good to see you at the top Deb. Congratulations on your worthy honor in first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/24/2011 2:27:00 PM
Super congrats Deb on your first place win with this awesome entry luv.. enjoy your top spot where the air is so rare like your lovely words..
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Date: 3/24/2011 2:16:00 PM
Oh so good I hope you gave him this for Valentines Day? Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/24/2011 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2011 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Make Me Swoon" contest Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/24/2011 11:07:00 AM
congratulations on this well deserved placement
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Date: 3/24/2011 11:02:00 AM
Absolutely beautifu! So deserving of First place Deb. Congratulations on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/24/2011 10:56:00 AM
Indeed, you have made us all swoon!! Congratulations, Deb, on your win!!!
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Date: 3/24/2011 10:30:00 AM
ooh this is exciting, seeing who actually wrote these,, congrats Deb on your first place win in my contest, this definitely had the "swoon" thing going
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Date: 3/10/2011 4:28:00 PM
Well, you definitely have me swooning, Deb. VERY romantic and good use of the form, too. Best wishes in Francine's contest. Love, Carolyn
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