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This Love

The itch to love 
and satiate pride
swallowed too long stifles
breath
without emancipation
A tragic capitulation to self

Pride, perhaps acerbic,
leaves morsels to ruminate
and loves to regurgitate
coy ceramic dalliances
and Venusian masquerades
Masked in smiles
And toxic

This love, 
These loose granite memories
Ductile innocents
And hasty lulls
These shining sunsets 
And supernovas
Must rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/8/2024 2:05:00 PM
Be at peace, for all is overcome is what pops Into my thought while reading this.'
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Marugu Mo
Date: 3/13/2024 11:12:00 PM
Thanks Joe
Date: 3/6/2024 6:30:00 AM
Dear Marugu, You really delve into the complexities of pride and love, evoking profound emotions. Your imagery creates a picture of internal conflict and the consequences of unchecked emotions. Your words show the importance of self-reflection and letting go. This is a thought-provoking poem. - Blessings, Daniel
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Marugu Mo
Date: 3/8/2024 6:02:00 AM
Thank you Daniel.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things