This Life Not So Well Shown
This life today,
just aspires positions,
breathe credit cards
and electronic transfers,
promises of debts and purchases,
debts and arrangements...
commodities and titles...
the fantasy is over
since they eliminated
the joy, when they expelled
bar customers... !
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