This Life I Detest

This Life I detest
For Happiness only comes in moments now.
We have done so many things...
"But what is bad or good that thinking makes it so..."
Maybe it is I who is changing color--
Still I so want to point the finger


                                        6/1/'13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hall Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 1:22 PM
Simply so. Loved it.
Koven Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 9:35 PM
Ah another depressive soul. You expressed yourself well. So many of us feel the same
Shelly Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 2:07 PM
Thank-you. gabe
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June 8, 2013 at 4:13 PM
I likes the ending, we always want to have someone to blame , I enjoyed this write Gabe, ~always, Linda
Shelly Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 6:47 PM
Thanks Linda. gabe
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