This Life

From life to death, a choice is made,

our lives are short, with consessions paid.

 We learn from the past, our future not known,

as we travel on, we carry what is sown.

 Our burdens are many, our troubles few,

without Gods love, we can never get through.

 Do unto others, as they would to you,

for our lord is mighty, and his love is true.


By johnaarongreen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 7:10 PM
Mostly wisdom is not in the choices we make at least for myself and learning from past mistakes would be a blessing. The last two lines put life in perspective though. You send a great message in this timely verse John.
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December 7, 2011 at 1:00 AM
John, i just sat in my car talking to someone,, about life and death... and how it is useless... we are all pawns of death... I'm in a negative mood,, only cause sometimes i don't understand life,, and the games it plays... everything ends in death.. everything has a short span.. well I complain a little, with God, but, you understand.. God is all mighty,, it's just sad that we have to use this pass me by body just to get to him,, or meet his standards.. enjoyed,..p.d.
Smith Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 3:11 PM
I love this poem it is so true
Green Avatar
October 14, 2011 at 6:50 PM
thank you so much...
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May 1, 2011 at 4:56 AM
Divine positive poem John. The message is an inspiration to all who read it. Anne
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April 27, 2011 at 1:10 AM
Wonderful as always john. Your style is impeccable and true to your heart, which makes it so powerful. Each word speaks out. Great job my friend. R.M.
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April 24, 2011 at 7:32 PM
I actually really like this poem. You did a really good job on it. Also, reading your other poems.. you have good stuff, you should publish them officially.. :)
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