This Isn'T Goodbye

Can't believe its over,
That you're drowning
Weren't we meant to be?
I should have sensed the jeopardy
Observed the alarms 
Right there in front of my sight 

Wait a minute!
Can't we start it over?
Let me try to utilize
One more chance
Maybe tomorrow
You'll say that you're mine 
Only then will you realize
I have changed 

I will show you
I'm now in it for life
I hope I will see you 
Someday
Together in Spirit
I was a fool of myself
To let the wind blow you
Into the atmosphere
And never landed

I try to call
You say you have so much to do
You want to spend 
The rest of life in gravel
Entombed
I tell you 
There is so much
I want to say
I want to spend my life
Deep in earth, too...
With you
Only not to demolish our vow


This Isn't Goodbye
Seeing you waving at me 
An optical illusion?
We had joy and fun
Then, untimely
I woke by myself
Maybe it is time 
I admit you are gone for good!
Gone for good?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/10/2018 1:44:00 PM
Such a tornado of inner turmoil I sense in your poem, the spiraling of a relationship is a turning and returning thing and makes for poetry.
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Moses Gava
Date: 9/5/2018 7:39:00 AM
Fact! No relationship is ought to last forever
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