This Isn'T a Poem

It suddenly struck me as I sat in my familiar chair 
towards the back of the white buzzing café,
a hazelnut terzetto staring up at me,

it struck me what Magritte was trying to tell us
when he painted “This Is Not A Pipe” below
the dark strokes of a brown bowl and black stem,

a slight glare the only sign of life beyond it.
He wasn’t pointing out what was real and not
with a wave of disdain to the perplexed viewer

but, rather, was underlining what most of us are
too frightened to admit, that everything is what
we make of it – or not – and objects have no

preference as to the labels spectators cook up.
And I will leave you with that slippery nugget,
close the spinach leaf I was scribbling in,

take a last sip of the faded photograph before me
and step out into the foggy rush hour bee hive,
this life vest slipped carefully into my coat pocket.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/16/2012 5:45:00 PM
After reading THIS one,I have decided that you have a brilliant mind! I agree completely with what Chris here said about the comment further down. This is contemporary poetry at its finest. If I only know how to do that, I would not be stuck in the romantic era with all my sonnets. Anyway, Excellent work!
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Darryl Davis
Date: 1/17/2012 9:53:00 AM
Quite possibly the best compliment I've had in recent memory...cheers! :-)
Date: 1/12/2012 5:35:00 PM
no not a poem
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Darryl Davis
Date: 1/16/2012 1:28:00 PM
Exactly :-)
Date: 1/9/2012 4:23:00 AM
Really liked this made me think..
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Date: 12/21/2011 6:46:00 PM
ha! i suppose we all are not posting actual poems, but some type of representation of them. a "slippery nugget" indeed.
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Date: 12/21/2011 2:48:00 PM
This is an awesome write, great story and message in it...
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Date: 12/21/2011 2:04:00 PM
Isn`t a poem o.k. but it is good. OXOX Love Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/21/2011 5:46:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Darryl. Wishing you a New Year filled with inspiration and the best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/20/2011 3:07:00 PM
maybe not, but whatever it was, i thoroughly enjoyed it! write on!
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