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This Is What It Is

Well It turns out You where in no need of a heart You’ve figured out where it was out to trout You’ve whacked with worthless weeds of gay But Cloud Nine is Too Hazy, isn’t it? All these “unnecessary questions” you say- But let me tell you this: You didn’t foil my heart You didn’t craft a circle of maze So I shall catch a “phase” You didn’t cause unbearable pain In which I crouch in my corner And let it take me faraway From sane You didn’t race the rains Or give the skies a falling grey Responsible for the dead trees in My Garden? I think not No, Dear: You just educated me From unwarranted Love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/11/2009 10:06:00 AM
Great strong write Sajdah
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Date: 6/11/2009 8:03:00 AM
"Craft a circle of maze,"....."Responsible for dead trees in my garden." I love your style and your touch of humor. You are too much! So glad I found you, you found me. Love, daver
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Date: 6/10/2009 10:10:00 AM
this is a nice write i love the message it is sending and thanks for the comment
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Date: 6/9/2009 9:53:00 AM
Brilliant!
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Date: 6/9/2009 7:45:00 AM
Beautifully composed.
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Date: 6/9/2009 7:28:00 AM
Thank you again, Saidah. Yes, I have lived many, many years and I know not myself..nor God. Trust me..this can happen. I love your line "you didn't race the rains"...lovely...and I also like this ending. Patricia
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Date: 6/9/2009 7:12:00 AM
genius poems! i love the message "between the lines" :))! at least i hope i got it right cuz your writes are very complex and unique! very pretty! Ps: thanks for the nice comments you left me, i really appreciate your views, i'm new here! :D soup mail for you,Stephanie
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