This Is To a Poet I Have a Newfound Fondness For

THERE AIN’T NO SCORE NO MORE

I recall when we first sang that f****ing song
And danced from twilight until the sun
As for me we couldn’t have danced too long
As I freely floated and you sensually spun

You sang lead and I the backup harmony
A symphony composed by only you and me
The theme was a sonata meant to be
And so I thrilled to my dancer’s decree

“hold me closer and tighter my dear”
Those were the lyrics I penned for you
“let thy words draw me ever near”
And thus the melody did what only it could do

When I scribed those words they seemed so real
And “eternal” was a concept I suddenly understood
But by the orchestration was I taught how to feel
As destiny and perpetuity haS done all IT  could
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Now due to you I can no longer sing that song
Nor can I listen to it any more
The rhythm’s off and the lyrics are wrong
Since I wrote the words but you ruined the score
                © 2011.…Phreepoetree  ~free cee!~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/6/2011 11:56:00 AM
Ace! Perfect POETRy PHREEcee!
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Date: 11/20/2011 3:04:00 PM
This is great! Wonderfully written!!!
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Date: 11/20/2011 1:50:00 AM
I really do like your style of writing. Keep up the great work! By the way, thanks for the cheerful soupmail. :) Stay awesome, kay? Always, Laura
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