This Is the Road

This is the road that leads to my father's home
It is old and dusty with bullock-carts creaking,
Carrying the  heavy weight of the freshly cut sugar-cane
To the mills nearby for our sugar laden tables,
Piled in our court-yards are the freshly made cane balls 
Tingling on our taste-buds with its melting ginger tang.

This is the road that zig-zags to my father's dear home
Cyclists are few carrying fodder for the cattle,
Trudging on the pathway with bundles on their heads
Farmers are spotted and responsibilities enumbered,
Carefree children running all asunder
The rural joys have much for us to remember.

This is the road lined with dancing mustard fields
Halt it will at my father's flowering doorstep,
My mother will be sitting in the verandah patiently
Peering her eyes in wait for her daughter to return,
Thirsty is her heart for her daughter's true love
Nestle will I in the warmth of her arms.

This is the only road that I always do treasure
Woven is it with memories to pleasure,
Every pebble and sand grain is drenched 
In the sweat of my father's very long sacrifice,
My mother's footsteps are embedded in time
Leading me home with my finger she held.


(Second Place
May 6, 2016
For Nayda Ivette Negron
Memories)

(October 15, 2015
Contest: The Doesn't Fit
Sponsor: Carol Eastman)

June 26, 2016
For Laura Loo
Second Place
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A  Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 8:30 PM
Balveen, wonderful win. skat
Cheema Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Thanks Skat! That was quite some time back!
Chansarkar Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 2:47 PM
How vivid and real,congrats Balveen!
Cheema Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Thanks!
Scars Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Balveen, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Cheema Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 1:39 PM
Thanks!
Negron Flores Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Congratulations Balveen on the placement of the contest.
Cheema Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Thanks Nayda!
Canerdy Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 8:47 AM
This is a beautiful poem, richly descriptive. Congratulations on your win, Balveen. Janice
Cheema Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 10:06 AM
Thanks for your appreciation, Janice!
A  Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 11:06 AM
Balveen, Wonderful win. **SKAT**
Cheema Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 10:06 AM
Thank you so much Skat!
La France Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 4:41 PM
Balveen, this is beautifully penned and lovely, a soothing 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, can you hear me God ~~
Cheema Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 10:55 PM
I'm, somehow, sentimental about this poem, Hyades and I Have A God. Thanks for reading my poems, Wings!
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 8:48 AM
wow Balveen, you created such a nostalgic peaceful feeling poem about your home This is beautiful. I especially loved the imagery of dancing mustard fields!!
Cheema Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 10:01 AM
Thanks Andrea! It is, perhaps, my most loved poem-a flashback of my college days when my mother would wait for my return from the hostel. Love, Balveen
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