This Is Only Part of Me

sometimes im weak
sometimes im strong
sometimes i care
sometimes i dont
sometimes i feel pretty
sometimes i feel ugly
sometimes im happy
sometimes im sad
sometimes im nice
sometimes im mean
all this is only
part of me

i have goals 
i have dreams
i have defeat
i have fear
this is only 
part of me

sometimes im lost
sometimes im found
sometimes im confused
sometimes im confusing
at the end of the day
this is only part of me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 5:19 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Shana. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Quirk Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 12:48 PM
thank you
Colvin Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 10:24 PM
Well Shana, if you have all these parts in a day, i'm assuming this goes on day after day?... You have left me hanging! At what point do you become whole? I would've like the poem to have ended on a positive note, letting me know how the day can close as a whole, and not in parts. To discover yourself is good; to know yourself is much better. Quickly take the parts, as in a puzzle, and arrange them, to see how beautiful and whole you really are. Don't delay, time is running out!
Quirk Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 12:48 PM
thank you
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