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This Is Only Part of Me

sometimes im weak sometimes im strong sometimes i care sometimes i dont sometimes i feel pretty sometimes i feel ugly sometimes im happy sometimes im sad sometimes im nice sometimes im mean all this is only part of me i have goals i have dreams i have defeat i have fear this is only part of me sometimes im lost sometimes im found sometimes im confused sometimes im confusing at the end of the day this is only part of me

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Date: 5/24/2011 5:19:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Shana. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Shana Quirk
Date: 5/24/2011 12:48:00 PM
thank you
Date: 5/23/2011 10:24:00 PM
Well Shana, if you have all these parts in a day, i'm assuming this goes on day after day?... You have left me hanging! At what point do you become whole? I would've like the poem to have ended on a positive note, letting me know how the day can close as a whole, and not in parts. To discover yourself is good; to know yourself is much better. Quickly take the parts, as in a puzzle, and arrange them, to see how beautiful and whole you really are. Don't delay, time is running out!
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Shana Quirk
Date: 5/24/2011 12:48:00 PM
thank you

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