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In the depths of darkness a sad girl resides Her heart heavy and burdened, with secrets she hides She walks through life a shadow in disguise Haunted by her demons her sorrow never subsides A killer within her, an urge she can't ignore An abyss of darkness, an eternal war Her hands are stained with the blood she spills, A dance of death, her hearts icy chill Fire engulfs her, a burning inferno within Consuming her soul, fueling her skin She longs for embrace, love's gentle touch But her heart, it burns too much Her tears fall like embers, leaving trails of pain A shattered spirit, scorched by the flame She wanders alone, in a world so cold Her burning heart, a story left untold In the depths of darkness, she finds her solace A sad girl, a killer, bound by her own malice Her journey continues, through the night she roams Her free verse of sorrow, etched in stone

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Date: 12/18/2023 8:39:00 PM
This is evocative! I really liked these lines: Her tears fall like embers, leaving trails of pain A shattered spirit, scorched by the flame
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Date: 12/7/2023 12:36:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Marijayne Vasquez
Date: 12/7/2023 10:01:00 AM
Thank you for being so kind.
Date: 12/6/2023 6:28:00 AM
A deeply emotive poem Marijayne.. Congratulations on having your poem showcased..
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Marijayne Vasquez
Date: 12/6/2023 10:00:00 AM
Thanks but what do you mean by showcased?

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