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This is madness


“This is madness….” 

I climbed to the top like Dante
and followed my shadow irreverently 
swiftly down the slippery slopes of hell, such beauty
my breath taken away by fearless poetry
a moment exonerated in loneliness
breath like bread is eaten up, a last meal devoured
removed as if it were an illusion 
the Schumann in me still silent slowly beats,
the eyes eclipse;
this is madness....

My Life: A Croquis


Candide Diderot. ‘25
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Griffiths Avatar
February 7, 2026 at 3:16 AM
I like how you play around with the senses with breath and bread.
Diderot Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 2:27 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DhEIz9abCpY
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November 26, 2025 at 3:11 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EgC1syeslnY
Spilchuk Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 7:03 AM
Great post.
Diderot Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 2:27 PM
Thank you.
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November 20, 2025 at 11:59 PM
"I Skied Down Mount Everest (world first, no oxygen)" / Red Bull
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November 20, 2025 at 11:59 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cjZvFY6__qw
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