Notes About The Poem

~1st Place~
Contest: What Courage Means To You
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Judged: 12/20/2016

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2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 15 Poetry Contest 
Sponsor, Mark Toney 
Entered, September 6, 2025,

This Is Courage

(In honor of my husband, a paid Firefighter for 27 years
who retired as Assistant Chief in 1986)

It's 3:00 am on a frigid, dark winter night.
   A piercing alarm shatters the silence, and
he speeds away on a truck, lights flashing,
   horns blaring, to respond to the emergency.
At the scene, all three floors of the building 
   are engulfed in flames, which are spreading
to some adjoining apartments on either side.
   With selfless dedication and strong courage,
he rushes into that raging, roaring inferno.
   He is a firefighter on a mission to save lives.

But many people never think of the virtues
   which carry him through his difficult work.
What endless stamina and courage it takes
   to race into a burning structure, alive with
flames licking at him from many directions;
   to enter the interior filled with dense smoke, 
where the visibility is zero and requires him
   to wriggle on the floor, on hands and knees 
where it is less thick, to see anything at all
   with the perils of the floor collapsing under him.

But he forgets the risks. He needs to rescue
   the trapped children, mother, elderly couple, 
or anyone hiding beneath a bed, in a closet,
   out of sight, behind a stove or refrigerator;
or those stranded and crying by open windows 
   where he leads them to stay calm and come
to the ladder to be carried away to safety below
   where paramedics can assess medical needs.
 Yet, so many times, he must face deep pain;
   those lives lost, no matter how hard he tried.

This is courage.
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Vinson Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Sandra, vivid and clearly delineated with that gift of communication that you have in abundance. : )
Daniel Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 12:46 AM
This is great, I agree with Janis completely:) congratulations on your win:)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 10:01 PM
I am glad to know that your husband was such a brave man and that he reached retirement without injury. This is truly a blessing when you think of the perilous job of firefighters. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Janis.
Sands Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 4:05 PM
Yes, Sandra, that is courage. I agree with Charlie. Congratulations on your win. :)
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 8:08 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi! Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 3:43 PM
That's courage. Congratulations Sandra...
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 8:08 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie. Sandra
Y. Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 3:42 PM
Hi Sandra, It's no surprise that you placed so well. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Thank you again, Alexis! Hugs, Sandra
Martin Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Great tribute for all those who risk their lives to save others! Congrats! :-)
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Thank you so much, Mark. Sandra
Roper Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 3:16 PM
Wonderful poem and very courageous when men like your hubby put their lives in danger for the others in need . Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
Rockwell Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 3:16 PM
This is beautiful and so true Sandra! So honored to share first place with you! ~Cindi~
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Thank you very much, Cindi! Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 2:39 PM
Thanks Sandra for this top write, I really value the courage of these brave men. I think of 9 11 and how they were rushing in as everyone rushed out of the buildings. What incredible valor! A7
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 8:23 PM
John, thank you again for another inspiring contest and for my wonderful placement on your winner's list. Yes, we knew several firefighters who lost their lives that day on 9/11...so sad. Sandra
Y. Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Hi Sandra, First of all I want to thank your dear husband for his years of service. WoW! This is one of the best I've seen for the contest.Being a firefighter is a tangible form of what "courage" is all about. It's "courage" in motion. You have courage too, for it took courage to watch him leave and not know if he would return. This is a winner in my book. I wish you the best of luck for contest. A without a doubt 7 and a fave:-) Alexis
Haight Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Dear Alexis, thank you so very much for your uplifting comments and so supportive remarks about firefighters as courageous public servants. Yes, it was difficult at times during those years, but doing this service was in his heart since his father and grandfather had served as well...three generations of firefighters! I appreciate your kind fave and 7, and thank you again! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 11:15 AM
What a fabulous tribute Sandra - such incredible brave men and women who risk their own lives to save others:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 12:18 PM
Thank you very much, Jan. Yes, this profession takes much courage for sure...I appreciate your uplifting comment and GL wishes! Hugs, Sandra
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