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This Hell

torn by rocks that bleed
Ghost Rider is haunted by
caverns’ stinking rot

desiring the throne
at Devil’s Advocacy . . .
are Satan’s mimics

these evil posers
are foiled again and again . . .
as will be Satan

March 27, 2023
for Robert James Liguori's Hell Haiku Poetry Contest

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/28/2023 7:08:00 AM

Brilliant Andrea. You've captured Blaze and the fortunes of defeat. :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/28/2023 4:15:00 AM

well well satan and hell.' place your head in Front of me satan, i'm told to crush it uniquely Blood and fire Holy ghost, In this here earth I Raise a toast..' to your final demise, Jesus as Host.'

Weston Gregory

Date: 3/27/2023 9:05:00 PM

It's in a bad place and it's getting worse....Jordan take on what is hell....I can easily discern it's as that in the caverns.

Richard Ferry

Date: 3/27/2023 12:22:00 PM

I live now in Guatemala City...The City is divided into zones...I live in a very safe zone 3 zones over is Hell. One of the most dangerous places in the world. You want to witness the Devil in action Its there

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/27/2023 1:10:00 PM

por people that have to live in the bad zone. So unfair to the kids. I hear all of south america is bad, and we have OUR share of bad areas in the US. BTW, i do not know anything about Ghost rider except for what I researched a little bit online. The only Marvel things I have liked were Batman movies and that one Joker movie that did so well in the Oscars. I don't like the animated stories just when they use real actors.

Richard Ferry
Date: 3/27/2023 12:22:00 PM

Richard Ferry

Date: 3/27/2023 12:12:00 PM

Andrea I have been a GhostRider fan since the first issue. Had the flames on my Harley tank. I was once naive. Had that blind optimism that afflicts the masses. But after decades of traveling thru the world. I have seen many horrors. Satan is in many forms. From the beginning of time and progressively worse

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/27/2023 1:07:00 PM

I totally agree with you, and it's scary as HELL

Richard Ferry

Date: 3/27/2023 7:02:00 AM

Take a good look You really think Satan is losing?

Joe Maverick
Date: 3/28/2023 4:23:00 AM

Andrea the division of temporal Reality and Super reality is coming close now..Signs are being shown on earth and in heaven..Also the lucifarians and Others play with the hadron collider ( of which i hear tales of dark entitys disrurbed) and affecting people present. So they Are meddling in the very stuff that will bring Gods action.'

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/27/2023 7:36:00 AM

this is for Marvel Comics, richard. Yes, in the real world he is doing great, but ultimately he will be defeated