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There's a lot of love...
                             and beauty
                                and sensitivity
                                   and goodness
                                      and mushiness 
                                         and joyfulness
                                            and playfulness
                                              and compassion
                                           and simmering passion 
                                        and come-to-me cries 
                                     and exploding sparks 
                                  and silken tenderness
                               and comforting warmth, and...
                Isn't that what you want from this heart of mine?



Dear Heart Poetry Contest (Winner: 3rd Place)
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Date written and submitted: 01/18/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/19/2020 10:03:00 AM
Nicely done, Edward--congrats!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/19/2020 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, L.J.:-)
Date: 1/19/2020 8:19:00 AM
Edward, so deep and emotion and I love your layout, congratulations on your win in the contest _Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/19/2020 9:52:00 AM
Thank you, Constance:-)
Date: 1/19/2020 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/19/2020 9:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for placing me, SO!:-) Most obliged.
Date: 1/18/2020 9:40:00 AM
That last line shouts out with yearning! Love the shape!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/18/2020 9:44:00 AM
Thank you, Kim:-) Glad you liked my poem!

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