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This Heart of Mine

There's a lot of love...
                             and beauty
                                and sensitivity
                                   and goodness
                                      and mushiness 
                                         and joyfulness
                                            and playfulness
                                              and compassion
                                           and simmering passion 
                                        and come-to-me cries 
                                     and exploding sparks 
                                  and silken tenderness
                               and comforting warmth, and...
                Isn't that what you want from this heart of mine?



Dear Heart Poetry Contest (Winner: 3rd Place)
Sponsored by Silent One
Date written and submitted: 01/18/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Carber Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 10:03 AM
Nicely done, Edward--congrats!
Ibeh Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Thank you, L.J.:-)
La France Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 8:19 AM
Edward, so deep and emotion and I love your layout, congratulations on your win in the contest _Constance
Ibeh Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 9:52 AM
Thank you, Constance:-)
One Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ibeh Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 9:53 AM
Thank you so much for placing me, SO!:-) Most obliged.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 9:40 AM
That last line shouts out with yearning! Love the shape!
Ibeh Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 9:44 AM
Thank you, Kim:-) Glad you liked my poem!
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