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This Heart Deserves

This heart cannot stand to be ignored; I no longer want your pity. The lack of empathy you threw at me— accusations that never touched my skin— cut so deep. Tormented by memories, things you said and did, echoes and vibrations of emotions I still shed like autumn leaves, fallen. A perfect pattern of scattered memories trails behind me. This bare and barren tree is rooted so deeply. It is but the tip, the edges where the branches meet the sky, of the deep soul you crushed; your words repeatedly tore me apart. No more will I allow you to sit upon these branches, enjoying the fresh air and the magnificent view. These branches have space only for those who cherish— for those who deserve my love. My broken, beating heart will mend. I no longer stand for your pity; I no longer beg for your pardon. This heart deserves gentleness; this heart deserves true love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/24/2018 12:09:00 PM
Hi ELizabeth.. You have described the broken heart very well and the voice of that heart saying that there is no space in it for the those having ill thoughts ..it is only for good hearted people...........this is so humble request .......i love this , and my favourite because i want to read it again and again
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Date: 11/9/2017 6:46:00 AM
Only Jesus Christ, can truly provide and heal as such. Amen, nevertheless, nice expression of your mind and and soul.
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ElizabethRose Wilkin
Date: 11/16/2017 6:14:00 AM
Thank you Ronald :)
Date: 10/26/2017 8:59:00 AM
Any help just ask.. Always happy to assist. You are a great poet.
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ElizabethRose Wilkin
Date: 10/26/2017 10:49:00 AM
Thank you for your kinds words!
Date: 10/26/2017 8:11:00 AM
Never beg anyone for forgiveness... a deep emotive write Elizabeth.. Instead of ABC, you could use free verse for the form..
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ElizabethRose Wilkin
Date: 10/26/2017 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for the guidance and comment. I really appreciate it. This is very new to me so appreciate all the guidance and advise given.

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