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This Girl

This girl, Unknown to the world, and quiet inside her room. Jabbering on the phone, To her one and only. This girl, Unaware of the world. Struggling to keep herself alive, Thriving on the alcohol The only thing keeping her stress away. This girl, Shut out from the world, her body reaches the limit, Bound to break, Bound to die, She waits. Inside her room, Jabbering to her one and only, drinking without exsistance of the world, not knowing her strengths nor her weakness, until her body is beneath the surface, and the whole world watches, as the dirt covers her casket.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/15/2011 6:14:00 PM
Nice character sketch of this girl, Olivia
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Date: 7/15/2011 4:09:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Olivia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2011 10:32:00 PM
Omg. Very, very moving. :) beautiful.
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