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"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" John Ruskin, 1853 Those little pieces, one by one are moved in place throughout each day- to start once more, aft night is done. Resuming then, in the same way, we shape life's puzzle- bring to light those things accomplished- grand or slight- put forth life's meaning into sight. But, sometimes, pieces fail to fit and jar the rest- to make us quit until we rest, to then admit this game of life- we cannot shun. When pieces join in place to stay, full span displayed- both dark and bright- our finished life- to God, commit. August 27, 2020 ~1st Place~ Contest: Completely Your Choice (6) Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 09/09/2020 ~1st Place~ This Game Of Life Contest: All The Little Pieces Sponsor: Constance La France Judged: 9/03/2020 Fragmented Rhyme Form (Created by Constance La France)

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Date: 9/11/2020 6:46:00 AM
Clearly the little pieces make up our lives, grand and slight...nicely penned Sandy. congrats. Jeanne
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Date: 9/10/2020 3:14:00 AM
Congrats Sandra....Life is indeed like a puzzle. Which where we can only fit the pieces together.Take Care.
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Date: 9/10/2020 2:40:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my challenge All The Little Pieces with this excellent write _Constance
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Date: 9/4/2020 4:10:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win :) - Wish you a lovely weekend, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/27/2020 10:14:00 AM
- All the pieces are important - A lovely poem, Sandra :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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