This Fray

Looking back past this blink in time....
Finding his innocent child; had we known
How to save a life I lost a friend, somewhere
Along the way amid life's bitterness silently gazing
Purity's eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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George   Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 6:31 AM
Very sensitive, insightful verse you have written, here Jeremy. I think I sent you a reply earlier thinking you were someone else who goes under many names. After reading your poetry, I think I was incorrect. This verse is awesome. bfn Lainie
Onclaud Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 2:21 PM
sensitively written and rich in meaning in its brief form... well done, jeremy!.. huggs
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