Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Paradelle

This Form - Paradelle

(Paradelle) 



What  can I say to you  more? 
What  can I say to you more? 
This form  for me is so much fun 
This form for me is so much fun 
To you what more can I say 
So much fun for me this form is… 

Afraid I am already addicted to this 
Afraid I am already  addicted to this 
Playing with words from the heart they come 
Playing with words from the heart they come 
Already to  this afraid I am  addicted 
From the heart playing-they come from the heart! 

Hooked on verses  of every  kind 
Hooked on verses  of every kind 
Toying with words, moving the lines 
Toying with words, moving the lines 
Of every kind hooked on verses 
Moving the lines-toying with words 

To you this form  say more 
With words and verses of every kind 
Already addicted moving the lines 
From the heart  hooked on to this 
Afraid they already come playing 
With so much fun! 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2004 


09.17.2014

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Dr.Ram Mehta September 18, 2014 at 5:33 AM Oh, Dorian, this is another surprise. I think Ebonics, the figure of speech is nicely used. I have never heard about this form. But I will surely look into it. Dorian Petersen Potter September 18, 2014 at 10:01 AM Hello my friend! Thanks for dropping by!xxxx D.

Barbara Gorelick September 17, 2014 at 1:33 PM Back again..my education sadly lacking Im afraid..I looked this up and thank you and Billy for giving me something new to think about. BG Dorian Petersen Potter September 17, 2014 at 1:50 PM Eh Barb how nice of you to drop by and thank you so much for commenting! I am so glad to know that Bill and I are giving you something more to ponder poetically about it . Lol. Have fun my friend and give it a swirl! Be back to your page to read more of your beautiful poetry very soon :) Just wish I have more hours and time some times everyday. Lol.... Hugs! Best to you! xxx D.

Barbara Gorelick September 17, 2014 at 1:29 PM let me look up this form, Ive never heard of it before. Thanks for stopping by my poem..BG Dorian Petersen Potter September 17, 2014 at 2:03 PM You're more than welcome my friend. Yes, go and research it, and see for yourself...to me is a lot of fun like most of the forms I do and use for years. Kind of tricky but you can do it Barb! Lol... Nothing impossible or to hard in life (and that goes for any poetry form or style too for that matter) when we have the will to accomplish it or at least try it. You can say I am very addicted to poetry and writing in all the forms that I find and like. I am so happy I brought this to your attention perhaps for the first time. It's out there but sadly no many poets use it. See ya around! Xxxx D.