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This Feeling

What is this feeling that I feel, so unbelievable, so unreal. When I'm around you I feel strange, but this feeling I have, I don't want to change. When I look in your eyes it's like a maze, I get lost in just one gaze. You're so extraordinary, you're out of this world, Your lips like cherry and your eyes like pearl. I didn't know what was this feeling, but day by day it was revealing. Then one night i got a message from above, and I finally realized that I was in love

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Date: 3/8/2018 12:31:00 PM
Snow is growing diamonds. So appropriate! What a great line.
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Date: 3/8/2018 12:28:00 PM
'Cause loss doesn't cross her path. So powerfully written. Bravo, Mary! Well done.
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Date: 3/8/2018 12:24:00 PM
Well said; well written.
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Date: 3/8/2018 12:13:00 PM
Day by day it was revealing....telling, for sure! This is how love happens.
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