This Feeling

What is this feeling that I feel,
so unbelievable, so unreal.

When I'm around you I feel strange,
but this feeling I have, I don't want to change.

When I look in your eyes it's like a maze,
I get lost in just one gaze.

You're so extraordinary, you're out of this world,
Your lips like cherry and your eyes like pearl.

I didn't know what was this feeling,

but day by day it was revealing.
Then one night i got a message from above,
and I finally realized that I was in love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 8, 2018 at 12:31 PM
Snow is growing diamonds. So appropriate! What a great line.
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March 8, 2018 at 12:28 PM
'Cause loss doesn't cross her path. So powerfully written. Bravo, Mary! Well done.
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March 8, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Well said; well written.
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March 8, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Day by day it was revealing....telling, for sure! This is how love happens.
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