This Feeling

My heart beats fast,
I lose all feeling in my body,
It's like a dream,
Except for this time i'm awake.

When ever you're with me,
I get this feeling,
It's a feeling i can't explain,  
It makes me... happy.

A happiness i cannot explain,
It just comes and stays,
In my heart,
And forever it will stay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Burton Avatar
July 31, 2008 at 7:19 PM
I know you can do better than one poem.Good or bad just keep them coming even the exercises WRITE ON
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July 31, 2008 at 7:17 PM
COOL thats a feeling I wouldnt mind having
Degenhardt Avatar
July 31, 2008 at 4:56 AM
Isn't that a great feeling? It's a sense of completeness, love, euphoria, so many things. Love the flow in this, the clear expressions and the pause you take in the 2nd verse. Very well written. Michael
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