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This Feeling

My heart beats fast, I lose all feeling in my body, It's like a dream, Except for this time i'm awake. When ever you're with me, I get this feeling, It's a feeling i can't explain, It makes me... happy. A happiness i cannot explain, It just comes and stays, In my heart, And forever it will stay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/31/2008 7:19:00 PM
I know you can do better than one poem.Good or bad just keep them coming even the exercises WRITE ON
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Date: 7/31/2008 7:17:00 PM
COOL thats a feeling I wouldnt mind having
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Date: 7/31/2008 4:56:00 AM
Isn't that a great feeling? It's a sense of completeness, love, euphoria, so many things. Love the flow in this, the clear expressions and the pause you take in the 2nd verse. Very well written. Michael
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