This Fantasy Is Just Too Much

I'm so cheerful that I'm finally conferencing about, my fantasy,
It might seem so abstruse,
But this fantasy, I'm about to relate to you is just too much,
I'm despondent when I wet dream in my bed,
Knowing very well that you're not besides me,
This fantasy is just, too much.
I wake up red-faced in the middle of 3am,
Only to budge my hands to the other side of my bed,
You're not with me.
This fantasy is just, too much,
That, I can no longer hang onto it.
The wake ups during the wee hours are just, too much,
This fantasy is just A1 with its own lane.
From the back of my humanity,
This fantasy is just what I think of, about you,
What I adore, from you,
What I want, from you,
And the moon between your eyes.
This fantasy will always be too much,
Will always be there and here.

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Sietesantos Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 9:19 AM
I think we all like to indulge in a little fantasy from time to time. And that's all right! It gives us a chance to escape to a different or sometimes more exciting place in our minds and leave the daily drudgeries of life behind! Excellent write, my friend, that I enjoyed reading! Warmest regards. Pandita
Oule Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 4:58 AM
Sanches first sori for the belated reply my dear friend, but i thank you so much for reading my fantasy Poem #hugs dear one
Makama Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
Oule Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 3:35 AM
Aye its definitely #7 Thank you for reading my masterpiece about fantasy brother. Always welcome here
Sibanda Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Bryan, l enjoyed reading poem. If only our fantasies could be translated into reality, then our lives would be meaningful, so we assume.
Oule Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 9:31 AM
sure i accede with you brother
Torres Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 2:53 PM
nice one..i thinj the "fantasy" indeed..is too much.. :0)) ... i like it! ..AiyaH *__*
Oule Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 3:16 PM
sure do you as well get those torrential fantasies? tell me that you and we ride the same boat to the river bank. xx
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