This Fall Day

Sent the kid out to play
 On this a perfect warm falls day
 Lots of breeze to blow the leaves away
 Reminding me of early Mays rays
 
Exotic wind towards this evening fall
 In the horizon comes a great gray wall
 Thunder answers the rain storms call
 Taking in the magnificence of it all
 
Up in the sky today I saw
 A beautiful wonder a double Sun Dog
 One of the glorious things made by God
 In the sky a giant colored dot
 
And at the end of a perfect day
 I take a rest and think of the things to appreciate
 Yawning lazily I see it's getting late
 Thinking to myself that my day sure was great
 
This is a great big world
 And I am here just a single girl
 Then I give my hair one last twirl
 Going to sleep dreaming about a gigantic pearl

Ruth Courtney
10-31-2012
Autum Air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/19/2012 11:33:00 PM
A cute one, and I never heard of a double Sun dog. hmmm, what could that be!!
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Date: 10/24/2012 4:40:00 AM
their reflections off of one of our planets moons probley Venus the planet fights to keep it's moons a sun dog is made by that fight, the planet aligns it's self to regain moons over and over when a moon has enough water a sun dog is seen as the planet drags it back twords it
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Date: 10/24/2012 4:36:00 AM
a double sun dog is a like round rainbow has vertical or horizontal stripes and usually are yellow red and blue it old tales they forwarn against weather. I saw three in two days, one double/ one single, meaning USA is getting a natural disaster in the next year
Date: 10/19/2012 12:58:00 AM
A very well written poem Ruth, I like it. - Have a nice day ...... sweet dreams. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/24/2012 4:47:00 AM
thanks read the comments on poem to find out what I think a sun dog is
Date: 10/17/2012 10:41:00 PM
‡ The Dog Star. I haven't Heard Reference Unto This In A Bit And Love The Scene I Find In This Pleasing Rhyme, Sweet Beautiful Ruth Courtney. Tis Good To Find Your Beauty Here Tonight. Sweet Dreams. My Love, Rachel ‡
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Date: 10/24/2012 4:46:00 AM
there is a russian tale about how the sun ties every planet up with it's moons for the winter and Saint Nicholas frees them by knocking on chimmneys and over eating
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Date: 10/24/2012 4:45:00 AM
Rachel a sun dog is made when it tries to escape it's orbital pass around the planet the sun dog is seen as the planet drags the moon back into it's power, Notrosdamis said that we watch our weather change from such actions. This happens offten for Venus and Mercury but it also happens from our sun, when it's the sun major natural disasters occur,
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