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This Evening As We Fall In Love

~ Whispered sighs and twilight dreams, the stars reflecting in your eyes Evergreens and maple leaves, a harvest moon in autumn skies A quiet night, a chilly breeze October heavens up above You in my arms, a tender kiss this evening as we fall in love ~

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Arturo Michael

Date: 10/22/2019 12:03:00 PM

You talk about Serene...Sweetness permeates your write...

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 12:35:00 PM

I am glad you liked it my friend. Thank you

Lu Loo

Date: 10/22/2019 8:06:00 AM

awww how sweet, so much love and affection, I am never surprised to read greatness from you. :)-luloo

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Luloo. Your kind words are always a smile in my heart.

Wendy Watson

Date: 10/22/2019 2:28:00 AM

Chris, read in dulcet tones this could surely replace sleeping pills as a cure for insomnia! Your usual rhythmic musicality and such romantic content! Really beautiful.

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 8:37:00 AM

Thank you Wendy, that is such a nice thing to say. I appreciate you my friend.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/21/2019 8:21:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Chris. God bless you with many more, Gina

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 8:37:00 AM

Thank you so very much Gina.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/21/2019 7:35:00 PM

Very sweet, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 8:36:00 AM

Thank you so very much Line

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/21/2019 6:37:00 PM

what a gorgeous way to end your night... i love this my friend, another truly romantic sigh worthy write...i think i will linger in the beauty for a little while :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 8:36:00 AM

Linger as long as you like my friend. I always appreciate your visits and kindness.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/21/2019 6:03:00 PM

A beautifully written poem as your poetry helps us to have hope in love and brings positive thoughts. Good night Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 8:36:00 AM

Thank you Heidi, good night and good morning to you. : )

Hello There

Date: 10/21/2019 5:40:00 PM

A beauty, Chris ~ love the imagery and mood of this romantic piece.

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 8:35:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend.