Chris Green Poet Rhyme

This Evening As We Fall In Love

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Whispered sighs and twilight dreams,
the stars reflecting
in your eyes

Evergreens and maple leaves,
a harvest moon in
autumn skies

A quiet night, a chilly breeze
October heavens
up above

You in my arms, a tender kiss
this evening as we
fall in love

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Arturo Michael October 22, 2019 at 12:03 PM You talk about Serene...Sweetness permeates your write... Chris Green October 22, 2019 at 12:35 PM I am glad you liked it my friend. Thank you

Beautiful Scars October 22, 2019 at 8:06 AM awww how sweet, so much love and affection, I am never surprised to read greatness from you. :)-luloo Chris Green October 22, 2019 at 8:38 AM Thank you Luloo. Your kind words are always a smile in my heart.

Wendy Watson October 22, 2019 at 2:28 AM Chris, read in dulcet tones this could surely replace sleeping pills as a cure for insomnia! Your usual rhythmic musicality and such romantic content! Really beautiful. Chris Green October 22, 2019 at 8:37 AM Thank you Wendy, that is such a nice thing to say. I appreciate you my friend.

Regina Mcintosh October 21, 2019 at 8:21 PM Beautiful poem, Chris. God bless you with many more, Gina Chris Green October 22, 2019 at 8:37 AM Thank you so very much Gina.

Line Gauthier October 21, 2019 at 7:35 PM Very sweet, Chris. Chris Green October 22, 2019 at 8:36 AM Thank you so very much Line

Sandra Adams October 21, 2019 at 6:37 PM what a gorgeous way to end your night... i love this my friend, another truly romantic sigh worthy write...i think i will linger in the beauty for a little while :) hugs Chris Green October 22, 2019 at 8:36 AM Linger as long as you like my friend. I always appreciate your visits and kindness.

Heidi Sands October 21, 2019 at 6:03 PM A beautifully written poem as your poetry helps us to have hope in love and brings positive thoughts. Good night Chris :) Chris Green October 22, 2019 at 8:36 AM Thank you Heidi, good night and good morning to you. : )

Hello There October 21, 2019 at 5:40 PM A beauty, Chris ~ love the imagery and mood of this romantic piece. Chris Green October 22, 2019 at 8:35 AM Thank you so much my friend.