Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

This Endless Summer Storm

As sluggish as my thoughts this stifling day,
soft raindrops fall, but soon they’re falling fast,
intensifying! Rain has come to stay!
The wind starts in; trees shake as if aghast.
As rain pounds down, debris goes flying past!
A tree’s branch on my window loudly taps.
For some short time, the onslaught stops at last.
But suddenly, the sky with thunder snaps!
Relief was but this endless summer storm’s mere lapse.

July 1, 2018 For Dale Gregory Cozart's 
Summer Rain Storm(2) Spencerian Stanza Poetry Contest

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Lindsay Laurie July 15, 2018 at 10:09 PM Hello Andrea … very easy to picture this rain storm in your lines. Thank you Andrea - Lindsay

Susan Gentry July 12, 2018 at 1:28 AM Congratulations on your win. Great imagery.

Brian Densham July 10, 2018 at 9:24 AM Loved the way "...thunder snaps!" punctuates the end of the lapse. Nice. Congratulations.

Casarah Nance July 10, 2018 at 8:38 AM This is one of my favorites of the lot, we had a quick summer storm the other day and this write brought me right back to watching it on my porch. :)

Mike Gentile July 10, 2018 at 4:58 AM Congratulations Andrea, your summer storm struck gold xxoo

Connie Marcum Wong July 9, 2018 at 6:00 PM Congratulations on making this short winner's list Andrea! I wanted to write one for this contest but I didn't get to it in time. You did well my friend! : )

Kim Rodrigues July 9, 2018 at 5:35 PM I feel and see the storm in my mind’s eye! Congrats, my friend!

Sandra Haight July 9, 2018 at 3:58 PM Lovely, Andrea! Congrats on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier July 9, 2018 at 2:06 PM Congrats on your winning poem, Andrea. Well done.

Jan Allison July 9, 2018 at 11:44 AM can you send some rain this way Andrea, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart July 9, 2018 at 11:18 AM Andrea, congratulations on your 5th Place win! This was a tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.

Wendy Watson July 9, 2018 at 11:17 AM This is great, Andrea. Bravo!

Ralph Sergi July 4, 2018 at 7:39 PM your poem left me a little in awe, Andrea. Very intensified !

Vidya Raghunathan July 3, 2018 at 4:57 AM Very nice Andrea Dietrich..I could almost feel the storm

Richard Lamoureux July 2, 2018 at 9:33 AM We just had one of these storms a few days ago. It even blew gown a big tree I now have a better view of the lake.

John Gondolf July 2, 2018 at 7:40 AM Nicely written, Andrea, your summer storm sounds a bit violent. Best o luck. John

Vijay Pandit July 2, 2018 at 5:39 AM You captured in great detail the sights and sounds of a summer rain storm...great poetry as always.. a winning poem, Andrea!

Harry Horsman July 2, 2018 at 4:42 AM A poem written in true Spencerian classic style, love this Andrea.

Marc Acrich July 1, 2018 at 7:00 PM I forgot what good poet you re

Matthew Anish July 1, 2018 at 5:52 PM I wish it would rain here - we are having a heat wave in NYC. Nice description of the effects of a storm. My story was written long before I took ill. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Tim Smith July 1, 2018 at 5:35 PM Rain can be both a blessing and a curse...great piece Andrea

Ilene Bauer July 1, 2018 at 5:28 PM it's always a delight to read a poem of yours, andrea, and this one proves the point! well done, as usual...

Agnes Krampe July 1, 2018 at 4:38 PM Very vivid description of a summer storm, Andrea. I am not familiar with the Spenserian stanza, have to read up on that.