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This Dream That Is Life

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the me gets lost in the vastness of the you a drop in the ocean meshing in harmony symbiotic the stillness at the heart of my storm I give in and feel the power in unity with our universe silence flows through me with the galaxies’ secrets lifetimes cycling and recycling orchestrated breaking and merging the crests of waves as one in continuous motion of life and death one day we will wake from this dream and reunite on the other side illusion is time on a continuum I let go and I am I let you go and there I find you closer to me than ever AP: 1st place 2021 Submitted on June 22, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (JUN 23) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Posted on June 21, 2021

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Date: 6/24/2021 1:04:00 AM
one day we will wake from this dream and reunite on the other side Well Said. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/24/2021 3:42:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj ~
Date: 6/21/2021 11:32:00 PM
Vivid imagery, throughout, Line... Beautifully written ...
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Date: 6/22/2021 7:49:00 AM
Thank you very much, Supraja ~
Date: 6/21/2021 10:31:00 AM
Wow! This is incredibly warm, sensitive, and well-written. Enjoyable, thought-provoking write.
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Date: 6/21/2021 11:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Milton ~

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