Tanya Harrington Poet Alliteration

This By Day, That By Night

Dry, dirty, dilapidated buildings by day
Become suspicious, spooky shanties at night.
Daytime woods are filled with cute, cuddly creatures,
Yet at night they're forests filled with ferocious fiends of foul intent.
By day the moon is hidden half a hemisphere away
But shines marvelous, mellow moonbeams at midnight.
Invisible entities that revolve around our world by day,
Provide a panorama of planetary beings parading across the cosmos at night.

©  07-14-2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 26, 2012 at 6:11 AM Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Dungeon"contest Tanya. Love, Carol

David Williams July 23, 2012 at 3:14 AM Tanya congrats on your win, love it..David

Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2012 at 10:14 AM I love how you did this as a contrast. Very good approach, Tanya. congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 22, 2012 at 7:55 AM congrats Tanya on your HM for this awesome write luv..

Russell Sivey July 16, 2012 at 2:18 PM This is an extraordinary write my friend! I really enjoyed the creativity you put into this poem! It does seem to be true that things are different during the day than they are at night! I'm not sure which is better, but I do enjoy the differences between the two! You've done awesomely with this write Tanya! Great Work!!