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This Boy and Me

I loved a boy
His name was Free

He had eyes of fire
When he looked at me

We lived by the sea
This boy and me

Given to kindness
To all and me

But with a dark past
This boy, not me

Sometimes we talked
This boy and me

Sometimes he loved
This boy to me

We grew old together
This boy with me

He went above
This boy, not me

I went below
Not this boy, but me




I fought to see him
This boy named Free


I will always love you
Said this boy to me

"You sinner"
Said god

"You hypocrite"
Said me

For you loved your son so
But forbid for me

To love a man the same
As you did me

For I give my soul
To this boy named Free

A thousand fold
I would give it to Thee

So don’t condescend
Nor throw the stone

Lest the first sinner
Be better than me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/5/2014 12:40:00 PM
Undisguised love is bliss and joy Timothy. Dark Sunshine
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Date: 2/3/2014 3:37:00 PM
Such an emotional piece. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 2/3/2014 8:30:00 AM
Very Nice Poem! Enjoyed it much…Thanks for sharing//Sinclair
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Timothy Goetsch
Date: 2/5/2014 5:58:00 PM
Thank you for reading :) it's nice to know people like my writing. ^.^
Date: 11/19/2013 8:07:00 AM
Timothy, I came back to see if you are looking forward in posting a new poem soon.... looking forward. ..skat
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Timothy Goetsch
Date: 2/5/2014 5:59:00 PM
Hey :) I have posted two new poems. It'll take a while but I'll get some more up here :)
Date: 11/6/2013 12:22:00 AM
Timothy, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/4/2013 3:01:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, I look forward to enjoying your verse often. Light & Love
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Date: 11/3/2013 12:12:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Timothy ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :)))) / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/3/2013 10:23:00 AM
This is so wonderfully put together! I can't wait to hear more from you!
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Date: 11/2/2013 10:44:00 PM
wow Timothy, good ending... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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