This Aries Loves Her Capricorn

was it last night I saw the stars realign,
where Aries and Capricorn became one
constellation-

where brilliance of glittering blue shined 
like the renowned hope diamond had 
shattered and scattered across the milky way,
only existing for love’s rediscovery-

I think it was.

was it this morning that I awoke from 
a cosmic dream where two lovers redeemed
their love that had fallen from God’s grace-

I think it was.

for there is galaxy of reveries awaiting us, 
my sweet-
where echoes of chimera revelations are 
encompassed and held onto for safe keeping 
so that one day we can embrace our true destiny. 

           is it you that makes my soul shine brighter a supernova?
                                           yes...
                               I think it is.



October 3, 2018
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Carber Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 10:04 PM
Very nice-- as an Aries, I appreciate it even more-- congrats on your win
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this gem Laura! : )
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your gold medal win with this charming poem.
Moorman Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 11:22 PM
WOW!! and double WOW!! How does one express to you the wonderful way you address the love that is felt as they read your poem. Beautifully said and well deserving of your win.
Scars Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:15 PM
Awww thank you dear Curtis.:)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 7:52 PM
so beautiful, Laura Loo . Soup mail for you.
Scars Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Thank You! But. I haven't been able to get into my soupmail for months now. You can message me on FB? Sorry for the inconvenience!:)-luloi
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