Notes About The Poem

- This All Could Be -

The garden of love
Hearts that grow from nothing
Is it possible ?
Silver light has woven my dreams

At the sight of beauty
Life is power and breath
Laughin’, spinnin’, swingin’ all day

Chasing butterflies and bees
Oh, I love the silence that so many want to break
Unplumbed and infinity gently to my eyes and ears
Lead me to purity - something ethereal
Dalmation bellflowers express my delight

Breathed its oxygen, it felt so sweet and pure
Everything and forever, the garden is created for us





29/08/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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3. This All Could Be

Poem of the Day 30/08/2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 8:04 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Hugs Rick.
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 8:09 AM
- Thanks for visiting for the third time ... yeah, you like this one, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 5:31 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win my friend! : ) xxoo
Andresen Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 5:33 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 9:57 PM
Beautiful poem. I love it. Congratulations and blessings for you.
Andresen Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 6:18 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 11:59 AM
I absolutely love this poem of yours, Anne-Lise:-) Beautiful, and there's something celestial about it! Congratulations on your winning my contest, and earning a POTD recognition!
Andresen Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 6:17 AM
- Many thanks for placing my poem on your winning list ... glad you enjoy it, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 8:24 AM
So pretty then you throw in dalmation bellflowers..how exquisite! Congratulations on POTD!
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 8:42 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 5:50 AM
Anne-Lise, this is a beautiful poem, sorry I am late with my congratulations on POTD!
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:30 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 2:57 AM
The invisible become visible...in silence of sound...Love the feel of the write...Congratulations on POTD...All the best Anne- Lise
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:29 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 9:41 PM
I absolutely adored this poem....Breathed its oxygen, it felt so sweet and pure Everything and forever, the garden is created for us....how lovely so fitting to the picture you have chosen. Congratulations on your POTD honor Anne-Lise....Maria Hugs
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:29 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 2:20 PM
Hey Sunshine Smile - congratulations on this great write - absolutely deserved. Hugs dear friend, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:29 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 1:08 PM
So Beautiful Sunshine excellent my friend!
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:28 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 7:33 AM
This is do beautiful, you did that picture justice... Congrats on potd
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:28 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 9:27 PM
Congratulations on POTD, sweet lady ...
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:27 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ravidas Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 3:03 PM
Lovely acrostic, Sunshine :3 Congrats on POTD.
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:27 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Kurt :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:36 PM
I love this Anne-Lise. It began my day with beauty! Thank you! Congratulations on your deserving honor of POTD! : ) xxoo
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:26 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:24 PM
Beautiful poem and picture. Love it. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:25 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:06 PM
Lovely write Anne..Congrats n POTD..
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 3:13 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nicole Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 1:30 PM
Such a Beautiful Acrostic!! :) Your thoughts brighten my day, caress my heart with love- light and happiness. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. Enjoy your Holiday Weekend!! :) Brandy
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 3:12 PM
- One a pleasure ... is to make others happy, Brandy :) - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations :) - Wishing you a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 10:51 AM
I see it is POTD, congrats.
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 1:42 PM
- Thanks for your kind re-visit and congratulations, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 10:50 AM
You chose well. You penned a beauty. Hugs Rick.
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 1:42 PM
- Thank you very much, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 9:54 AM
I knew this was a special one. Congratulations!
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 1:41 PM
- Thanks for your kind re-visit and congratulations, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 8:12 AM
this is beautiful my friend...congrats on the honors of POTD :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 1:54 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:48 AM
Beautifully done my friend and congrats on POTD
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 1:54 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Wonderful!!! Congratulations on POTD :))) xomo!
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 1:53 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Superb acrostic Anne-Lise...love is in the air...too bad winter is coming lol...and Congrats!!! on your POTD!!!...sending warmth and poetry love...^WW^ :o)
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 1:53 PM
- Summer sings its last verse ... and autumn knocking on the door - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:01 AM
Just a little sunshine....this is an excellent acrostic poem.....I read it before seeing that it was an acrostic and its smooth flow and gentle meter ... very impressive write
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 1:48 PM
- Yes, just a little sunshine to you from me - Thank you so much for visiting and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)  
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