Jessica Arteaga Poet Rhyme

This Act

Breath
Your so heavy I'm neck
That you have made my closure sweat
I thought I was ready for these touches
But now I feel I'm trapped in clutches
Mouth
Have you've become my only hand?
The ones tied behind my back (are planned)
You get to touch these other fingers
Which let me suck so they could linger
Eyes
Do you know what you are seeing?
Receive so much but not conceiving
That the thought of this very act is bleeding
But yet I like it...but my heart is fleeting

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Elaine George July 15, 2010 at 12:57 PM Very deep and profound , Jessica. Great writin. Love, Lainie

Diiamond Rich July 13, 2010 at 7:10 AM A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.

Gert W. Knop July 13, 2010 at 6:23 AM Very emotional write, Jessica! Really a great job! Carolyn's birthday is on the same day as the French National Holiday!!! Thank you for your kind comments and have a great week!...All the best!...Gert

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson July 13, 2010 at 5:36 AM lots of emotion and feeling here. very expressive write. Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful day! Scarlett

Doris Culverhouse July 13, 2010 at 5:22 AM wow...great job

Carolyn Devonshire July 13, 2010 at 4:03 AM Very profound thoughts, Jessica. I especially like the last verse as so often we see what we want to see. My birthday is Wednesay, July 14, but thanks for the well wishes. Billy's card arrived early. Love, Carolyn