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thirty years later

thirty years later--- same staircase yet so high © kash poet 2012 ============== Placement:1st;(April 2012) Contest:Onesevenone (max 11 lines) Sponsor:Brian Strand By:kash poet

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Date: 5/4/2012 8:11:00 AM
Superb one. Congrats on your win in the contest. Love and best wishes...Ravindra
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Date: 5/3/2012 11:40:00 PM
soupmail
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Date: 5/2/2012 12:49:00 AM
you don't have to put them on. you are already wearing them (in your avatar. hahaha) well I am an hour over my limit tonight. GEEEZ I am gonna be tired in the morning.(but at least I am caught up)
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Date: 4/22/2012 7:22:00 AM
such little words, but they depict such a BIG meaning! Congrats Kash:)
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Date: 4/22/2012 12:33:00 AM
This can only come from a deep insight,, going to be one of my favorite haiku. Congrats Kashi on your well deserved first place win and writing such an excellent piece. Best wishes always, gautami
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Date: 4/21/2012 8:19:00 PM
Hey, big congrats to you, KAsh. Way to go in Brian's contest!!!
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Date: 4/21/2012 4:04:00 PM
Short,precise and wonderful piece.Congratulations on your super win in Brian`s contest........Keep flying friend......
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Date: 4/20/2012 9:46:00 PM
ah yes, this is where I had left off. WEll, I'm finally getting off here as well. I have lots of poems I need to try for contests and housecleaning to do but I finally caught up with Soup for the week! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/20/2012 2:28:00 PM
I could think of so many things this applies to . Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/20/2012 11:33:00 AM
Some of my fav Kashi poems are-While You Were Asleep Last Night, Will You Join Me, Zippergate, and Photo Album just to name a few....I did fav that one...I think Andrea loved it a lot as well...You've got a style all your own, kid. ha ha. I think your poetry is very very worthy of a book. :)
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Date: 4/20/2012 11:26:00 AM
Congrats.....great imagery. I totally enjoy ALL of your Haiku form. Excellent !!!God bless you Kash man. ;-0
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Date: 4/20/2012 10:56:00 AM
wowowow.. you are on a roll, kashi.. cheers to you for the big-time win.. thanks for your greetings... you really okay now??..come over! ..:)
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Date: 4/20/2012 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations. Well done.
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Date: 4/20/2012 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win today in Brian's "OneSevenOne" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/20/2012 6:30:00 AM
congrats on your win Kash
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Date: 4/20/2012 4:56:00 AM
Smashing win with this witty haiku! You got the Midas touch! Great work!...It is for the A/C and furnace. :) ps...I'll take that "advice" of yours for future "notes" contest..you are right! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 4/20/2012 2:56:00 AM
Very interesting one, my friend, loved always
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Date: 4/19/2012 12:28:00 AM
cute, kash!...nice thinking about aging
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Date: 4/18/2012 2:49:00 AM
Nice dear poet.
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Date: 4/17/2012 10:56:00 PM
enjoyed this write Kash... thanks for sharing...regards...Joseph
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Date: 4/17/2012 8:36:00 PM
Kash, wow...i can't even get pass my 29 step... a wonderful haiku... enjoyed... always..pd
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Date: 4/17/2012 6:07:00 PM
Usually that staircase seems much smaller after thirty years, so I am thinking this is a metaphor for life!!
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Date: 4/17/2012 3:41:00 PM
yes, our perceptions do change as we age. nice one!
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Date: 4/17/2012 8:14:00 AM
Why? Cos we're older easily get tired? :)
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