Thirteen Syllables Or Less

sun sets behind Pikes Peak

now bathed

with mellow moon

Entry for Timothy Hicks' "Thirteen Syllables Or Less" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 4:20 PM
A most lovely image and spiced with catchy alliteration, Robert! Congrats on your win! // paul
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 8:00 PM
a beautiful one, Robert. Congrats for your win.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 2:21 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Robert..
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 3:54 AM
A lovely vision Robert. Congratulations on your placement! ; )
Hicks Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 3:21 AM
Congrats Robert! There is a great warmth to this haiku with that mellow moon. Very beautiful imagery.
Gupta Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 12:08 AM
Superb...
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