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Thirteen Syllables Or Less

Thirteen Syllables Or Less Contest
Sponsor: Timothy Hicks

blue jay chirps
tunes of Spring
with colored harmony

~12 Syllables~

~Date Written: March 30, 2016~

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

April 4, 2016 at 11:36 AM

Laura's laurel.

Sandra Haight

April 3, 2016 at 8:26 AM

Lovely imagery, Laura. We see them in our front dogwood tree with their striking 'colored harmony'. Congrats on your placement. Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars

April 3, 2016 at 12:29 PM

Thank you Sandra :)-luloo

Paul Callus

April 2, 2016 at 4:43 PM

The image you presented is delightful, Laura! Congrats on your placement in this contest. ~ Regards // paul

Beautiful Scars

April 3, 2016 at 12:29 PM

Thank you Paul..:)-luloo

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 1, 2016 at 2:26 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Laura..

Beautiful Scars

April 3, 2016 at 12:28 PM

thank you...:)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

March 31, 2016 at 8:51 PM

hey, I see it won!! Congratulations, sweetie. And sorry again about Milo.

Beautiful Scars

April 3, 2016 at 12:27 PM

thank you Andrea. :)-luloo

Connie Marcum Wong

March 31, 2016 at 4:03 AM

Back to give you congratulations luloo on your placement. I loved colored harmony too! ; )

Beautiful Scars

March 31, 2016 at 10:42 AM

Thanks again Connie :)-luloo

Timothy Hicks

March 31, 2016 at 3:33 AM

Congrats Laura! Very beautiful marriage of color and sound. I just couldn't pass up "colored harmony" << a golden line, and a great capture of the blue jay.

Beautiful Scars

March 31, 2016 at 10:41 AM

Thank you :)-luloo