Thirteen Syllables Or Less

At noon time
two squirrels on lawn chair
awaiting lunch.




Sponsor: Tim Hicks
Contest Name: "Thirteen Syllables or Less"
Deadline: 4/29/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Breidenthal Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Good scene that you've given us during this verse. Very fascinating. -JWE
Hicks Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 1:40 AM
I thought this was really cute, Iris. It's like they are waiting for a human to feed them ... I used to know a fat one in the park that was not scared of people at all (probably because they kept on feeding them human food!) ... Soup Mail.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Didn't make contest, though.
Chakrabarty Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Hi Iris.Enjoyed your great haiku. love.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 7:28 PM
Hi. long time no hear... Thanks for visiting.
A   Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 3:43 PM
good luck in the contest:)
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 5:48 PM
Back to the drawing board, it never made it any further.
Allison Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 10:29 AM
what lovely imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Thank U Jan. Let's C what become of it.
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