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Thirteen Syllables or Less

At noon time two squirrels on lawn chair awaiting lunch. Sponsor: Tim Hicks Contest Name: "Thirteen Syllables or Less" Deadline: 4/29/16

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Date: 5/28/2018 8:17:00 AM
Good scene that you've given us during this verse. Very fascinating. -JWE
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Date: 4/8/2016 1:40:00 AM
I thought this was really cute, Iris. It's like they are waiting for a human to feed them ... I used to know a fat one in the park that was not scared of people at all (probably because they kept on feeding them human food!) ... Soup Mail.
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Iris Elizabeth Sankey-Lewis
Date: 4/12/2016 3:07:00 PM
Didn't make contest, though.
Date: 4/4/2016 12:11:00 PM
Hi Iris.Enjoyed your great haiku. love.
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Iris Elizabeth Sankey-Lewis
Date: 4/5/2016 7:28:00 PM
Hi. long time no hear... Thanks for visiting.
Date: 3/30/2016 3:43:00 PM
good luck in the contest:)
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Iris Elizabeth Sankey-Lewis
Date: 4/1/2016 5:48:00 PM
Back to the drawing board, it never made it any further.
Date: 3/30/2016 10:29:00 AM
what lovely imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
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Iris Elizabeth Sankey-Lewis
Date: 3/30/2016 2:31:00 PM
Thank U Jan. Let's C what become of it.