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Thirteen Syllables Or Less

At noon time two squirrels on lawn chair awaiting lunch. Sponsor: Tim Hicks Contest Name: "Thirteen Syllables or Less" Deadline: 4/29/16

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 8:17:00 AM

Good scene that you've given us during this verse. Very fascinating. -JWE

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/8/2016 1:40:00 AM

I thought this was really cute, Iris. It's like they are waiting for a human to feed them ... I used to know a fat one in the park that was not scared of people at all (probably because they kept on feeding them human food!) ... Soup Mail.

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/12/2016 3:07:00 PM

Didn't make contest, though.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 4/4/2016 12:11:00 PM

Hi Iris.Enjoyed your great haiku. love.

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/5/2016 7:28:00 PM

Hi. long time no hear... Thanks for visiting.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2016 3:43:00 PM

good luck in the contest:)

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/1/2016 5:48:00 PM

Back to the drawing board, it never made it any further.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/30/2016 10:29:00 AM

what lovely imagery:-) hugs Jan xx

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/30/2016 2:31:00 PM

Thank U Jan. Let's C what become of it.