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Thirteen Syllables Or Less

Thirteen Syllables Or Less mud pies crumbling dust of childhood loves filthy angels 3/29/2016 submitted to – Thirteen Syllables Or Less – Poetry contest sponsor – Timothy Hicks

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2016 3:23:00 PM

Hmmm, this looks like a double duty one . I LIKES it.

Lu Loo

Date: 3/30/2016 1:49:00 PM

John, I love this...I used to make mud pies all the time as a child. This brings back good memories, thanks for sharing :)-luloo

Constance La France

Date: 3/30/2016 7:52:00 AM

John, beautiful, oh I do recall the freedom of childhood and mud pies ~

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/29/2016 8:24:00 PM

Wonderful write John, best wishes in the contest.