John Lawless Poet Haiku

Thirteen Syllables Or Less

Thirteen Syllables Or Less

mud pies
crumbling dust of childhood
loves filthy angels

3/29/2016


submitted to – Thirteen Syllables Or Less – Poetry contest
sponsor – Timothy Hicks

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Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2016 at 3:23 PM Hmmm, this looks like a double duty one . I LIKES it.

Beautiful Scars March 30, 2016 at 1:49 PM John, I love this...I used to make mud pies all the time as a child. This brings back good memories, thanks for sharing :)-luloo

Constance La France March 30, 2016 at 7:52 AM John, beautiful, oh I do recall the freedom of childhood and mud pies ~

Charlie Smith March 29, 2016 at 8:24 PM Wonderful write John, best wishes in the contest.