Thirsty Soul

A bubbling brook
Attracts a doe and her fawn
They drink of her soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Nicely done, Larry. ...Ralph
Gorelick Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 1:14 PM
Wonderful Larry, I try and try to write something meaningful about deer..and here youve done it in 3 lines. BG
Spence Sr Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 12:56 PM
The imagery in this haiku is lovely. I also like the embedded message. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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