Phyllis Babcock Poet Personification

Thirsty Petals

Gentle rain kissed the flowers
as the radiant golden rays
touched the tender petals
renewing the delicate buds
drought had left them parched
the sun had baked then dry
they withered clinging with thirst
begging for a droplet of moisture
from the incoming clouds
the revival was immediate
they tasted the refreshment
and their thirst was satisfied
excited after the rain
they stretched out the petals
basking again in the sun's glow.

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The Situation July 25, 2023 at 7:21 PM Looking out the window I suppose. probably plants you planted. But thinking of the fires haunting your country. I wonder if your close enough to see them? Phyllis Babcock July 27, 2023 at 7:09 AM Thanks for your comment and yes the garden is not doing well in the heat and little rain. No we are not close to the fires at all but the smoke on certain days is heavy in the air. Thanks for asking. love phyl

Jennifer Proxenos June 18, 2021 at 11:41 AM What a relaxing write to read as you sit in your garden with your laptop on your lap getting inspiration from various images that attract your attention. I love this Phyl - i love being in a beautiful garden with plants, bushes and trees all around me.have landscaped quite a few in my lifetime. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Phyllis Babcock June 21, 2021 at 3:35 PM I love the colours of flowers in the summer they are so uplifting. The garden keeps us busy and yes nature brings much inspiration. Have a great week. love phyl

James Peranteau June 15, 2021 at 1:20 PM such the refreshing write dear poet! now, if j can get a cool breeze so I can finish trimming my roses ??... have a great day Phyllis..much love, james Phyllis Babcock June 17, 2021 at 7:34 PM Thanks James. Hope you are getting enough rain for your roses. Have a wonderful day. love phyl

Judy Ball June 10, 2021 at 4:13 PM Beautiful Phyl. What lovely imagery of the rain touching the petals and they revive before your eyes. Great stuff. God Bless, JB Phyllis Babcock June 17, 2021 at 7:33 PM Thanks Judy. We are blessed so much beauty in the world and yes rain does revive before our eyes. Have a nice day. love phyl

Lindsay Laurie June 9, 2021 at 9:23 PM Hello Phyllis … lovely description indeed Phyllis. At this time we are having the opposite; wind, rain, floods, cold sent up from Antarctica - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay Phyllis Babcock June 10, 2021 at 4:02 PM Lindsay we are into a very dry spring and the moisture levels are way down. We need rain badly for all the plants. We always have the wind up here. Have a great week. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2021 at 6:45 PM such a pretty picture of these flowers reac hing for the rain!! Phyllis Babcock June 9, 2021 at 6:58 PM Thanks Andrea the flower pots are beautiful and we just had some rain. love phyl

Connie Marcum Wong June 9, 2021 at 1:49 PM The splendor of life giving water is shared in this very lovely poem Phyl. A tribute also to Nature and the glorious sun. Beautiful my friend! Blessings xxoo Phyllis Babcock June 9, 2021 at 6:59 PM Thanks Connie. It was nice to see the rain come as it has been very dry this year. The flower all perked up after the rain. Refreshed and renewed. love phyl

L Milton Hankins June 9, 2021 at 1:35 PM A lovely piece of writing, Phyllis. I loved reading how the flowers were revived and refreshed by gentle rain. Phyllis Babcock June 9, 2021 at 7:00 PM Thanks for you comment. The much needed rain has come and the flowers were refreshed. love phyl