Thirsty Hands

—The Weight of Cannot— I came to stay the falling, yet the hour went on beneath the ordinances of fate; my hands, made eloquent by love, had power only to learn how powerless to wait. I stood beside the vanishing, and knew that presence hath no hands with which to stay; I called the name; its warmth remained, yet through that warmth, the beloved had already passed away. My love reached shore; the beloved was sea, and every strength I summoned sank from sight; I asked Time for one mercy; memory returned, and made remembrance ache with light. The thing I could not change changed what I knew of love: my hands grew still—and still reached you.
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Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 11:48 PM
Your poetry is amazing ; so nice to see you post a sonnet, especially now knowing you actually have written more than a few of them! (gosh. Are you just slumming here?). This is a big fave for me. The ending is so poignant. Love how you used two meanings of still.
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August 16, 2026 at 1:29 AM
Andrea, I am almost speechless to find the king eagle asking the little hummingbird how high the firmament is. And as for your “slumming” remark, I can only smile and bow my head: if I have indeed wandered below my station, I have been wonderfully mistaken about the station—for to be read by a poetess of your stature is no descent, but a rare elevation. 🕊️ Such an involved and discerning reading has made my poor verses feel, for a moment, worthy of existence. That you caught the two lives of “still” touched me especially; you did not merely read the word—you heard the small door I had hidden within it. 🙏 Thank you, Andrea. I shall treasure this kindness more quietly than I can express. Under kinder stars, ✨ Mohit Mitra
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