Mystic Rose Rose Poet Acrostic

Thirsty For Your Light

Be the rising Moon in my dark nights, for I am thirsty for your light.
 Rumi 

Thirsty as a dry and parched rose in the dessert 
Her liquid light of effervescent blue is calling me  
Invitations of the highest order, she is moon and I am a 
Roseling, seeking skies in a fibrillated night, she is a  
Spangled silver light upon my semi-shadowed face 
Titilating my senses across the waters I call her 
Yodeling for attention like a wild Irish rose 
                                  for 
Light me up moon as you light the garden rose 
I want to feel your power like the howling wolf 
Girth my soul and appeal to my senses moon 
Helium to my thoughts you bring me home to you 
True and trusted friend, you moon, are my telling rune.

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Valsa George April 18, 2024 at 8:41 PM This heartwarming plea to the moon to illumine you is so poetic and whimsical. You Roseling, long to be made radiant by the 'liquid light of effervescent blue' . This poem has lifted me to the velvety expanse of the sky. Lovely acrostic poem, dear Rose

Daniel Henry Rodgers April 17, 2024 at 8:26 AM Dear Rose, Your poetic verses unfurl a yearning as ancient as time, beckoning to the celestial dance of moon and rose. I want to be in the velvet expanse of night, where your words echo like a lover's plea, craving the luminous embrace of the moon. Amidst the darkness, its silvery glow offers peace, guiding the way home. May its ethereal radiance illuminate your path, a beacon of solace in the wilderness of longing. - Blessings, Daniel Daniel

Yann Rolland April 17, 2024 at 5:19 AM beautiful and enlightning poem, your images are delicate and touching, moemnt of grace reading you, thanks poet

Victor Buhagiar April 17, 2024 at 2:25 AM Excellent imagination and metaphors, especially with the rose-parched. Always lovely poems. Hugs Mystic Rose Rose April 17, 2024 at 4:38 AM Hello dear friend, glad you enjoyed the acrostic, have a beautiful day :)

Silent One April 16, 2024 at 12:10 PM Great quote from Rumi and excellent acrostic my friend.. Mystic Rose Rose April 16, 2024 at 6:10 PM I love Rumi quotes and poetry, I enjoyed his biography long ago, what a soul he had, :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy April 16, 2024 at 6:34 AM Moon is amazingly beautiful! How about its creator!? Wonderful poem! Have a wonderful day ~AA Mystic Rose Rose April 16, 2024 at 10:19 AM thank you so much for taking the time to leave a comment, Abdullah