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Thirsty For Your Light

Be the rising Moon in my dark nights, for I am thirsty for your light. Rumi Thirsty as a dry and parched rose in the dessert Her liquid light of effervescent blue is calling me Invitations of the highest order, she is moon and I am a Roseling, seeking skies in a fibrillated night, she is a Spangled silver light upon my semi-shadowed face Titilating my senses across the waters I call her Yodeling for attention like a wild Irish rose for Light me up moon as you light the garden rose I want to feel your power like the howling wolf Girth my soul and appeal to my senses moon Helium to my thoughts you bring me home to you True and trusted friend, you moon, are my telling rune.

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Valsa George

Date: 4/18/2024 8:41:00 PM

This heartwarming plea to the moon to illumine you is so poetic and whimsical. You Roseling, long to be made radiant by the 'liquid light of effervescent blue' . This poem has lifted me to the velvety expanse of the sky. Lovely acrostic poem, dear Rose

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/17/2024 8:26:00 AM

Dear Rose, Your poetic verses unfurl a yearning as ancient as time, beckoning to the celestial dance of moon and rose. I want to be in the velvet expanse of night, where your words echo like a lover's plea, craving the luminous embrace of the moon. Amidst the darkness, its silvery glow offers peace, guiding the way home. May its ethereal radiance illuminate your path, a beacon of solace in the wilderness of longing. - Blessings, Daniel Daniel

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/17/2024 5:19:00 AM

beautiful and enlightning poem, your images are delicate and touching, moemnt of grace reading you, thanks poet

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/17/2024 2:25:00 AM

Excellent imagination and metaphors, especially with the rose-parched. Always lovely poems. Hugs

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/17/2024 4:38:00 AM

Hello dear friend, glad you enjoyed the acrostic, have a beautiful day :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/16/2024 4:54:00 PM

I love the creative physical structure of your poem....it draws attention to the lines within your Acrostic. So beautifully penned, dear Rose! I also liked the Rumi quote...he's one of my favorite poets. I especially liked these lines about the moon: Titilating my senses across the waters I call her Yodeling for attention like a wild Irish rose I, too, enjoy gazing up at the moon...something about it releases my mind and I travel into space. :-) Have a great evening, hugs Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/16/2024 6:10:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed the fantasy poem Sara, good night, sleep well let the magic of the moon take you away

Silent One

Date: 4/16/2024 12:10:00 PM

Great quote from Rumi and excellent acrostic my friend..

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/16/2024 6:10:00 PM

I love Rumi quotes and poetry, I enjoyed his biography long ago, what a soul he had, :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 4/16/2024 6:34:00 AM

Moon is amazingly beautiful! How about its creator!? Wonderful poem! Have a wonderful day ~AA

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/16/2024 10:19:00 AM

thank you so much for taking the time to leave a comment, Abdullah