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Thirsty For Your Light


Be the rising Moon in my dark nights, for I am thirsty for your light.
 Rumi 

Thirsty as a dry and parched rose in the dessert 
Her liquid light of effervescent blue is calling me  
Invitations of the highest order, she is moon and I am a 
Roseling, seeking skies in a fibrillated night, she is a  
Spangled silver light upon my semi-shadowed face 
Titilating my senses across the waters I call her 
Yodeling for attention like a wild Irish rose 
                                  for 
Light me up moon as you light the garden rose 
I want to feel your power like the howling wolf 
Girth my soul and appeal to my senses moon 
Helium to my thoughts you bring me home to you 
True and trusted friend, you moon, are my telling rune.

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Valsa George

Date: 4/18/2024 8:41:00 PM

This heartwarming plea to the moon to illumine you is so poetic and whimsical. You Roseling, long to be made radiant by the 'liquid light of effervescent blue' . This poem has lifted me to the velvety expanse of the sky. Lovely acrostic poem, dear Rose

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/17/2024 8:26:00 AM

Dear Rose, Your poetic verses unfurl a yearning as ancient as time, beckoning to the celestial dance of moon and rose. I want to be in the velvet expanse of night, where your words echo like a lover's plea, craving the luminous embrace of the moon. Amidst the darkness, its silvery glow offers peace, guiding the way home. May its ethereal radiance illuminate your path, a beacon of solace in the wilderness of longing. - Blessings, Daniel Daniel