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08/08/23

Writing Challenge " T " words

Third Place

Contest by Constance La France.

Thirsty

THIRSTY

           My thirst oozing with champagne in goblet
            Melting into our mutual craving
           Following indigo line on sunset
          Misty dusty dusk, sky is engraving.
                               
          The tingling tremor, the lingering urge
           Watching dormant desires being drowsy
           Effervescence of love cascades to surge.
           Amour oscillates somnolent dozy.

           We float and sink in pearly passion
           Dear , come closer! My most precious gem!
           Memories of our love are in procession
           Our ethereal unison to claim.

           I am yours you are mine, fledged forever,
            In Earth or Heaven, joint endeavour.
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Ayantika Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 7:49 AM
So pleasant! I must also compliment the quote which is very nice! Congratulations on your placement!
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 7:13 AM
- A sensitive poem, Anisha ... beautifully written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Rolland Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 2:23 PM
champagne "help" passion, enjoyed your beautiful and sensitive poem
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