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08/08/23

Writing Challenge " T " words

Third Place

Contest by Constance La France.

THIRSTY My thirst oozing with champagne in goblet Melting into our mutual craving Following indigo line on sunset Misty dusty dusk, sky is engraving. The tingling tremor, the lingering urge Watching dormant desires being drowsy Effervescence of love cascades to surge. Amour oscillates somnolent dozy. We float and sink in pearly passion Dear , come closer! My most precious gem! Memories of our love are in procession Our ethereal unison to claim. I am yours you are mine, fledged forever, In Earth or Heaven, joint endeavour.

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Date: 8/10/2023 7:49:00 AM
So pleasant! I must also compliment the quote which is very nice! Congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 8/9/2023 7:13:00 AM
- A sensitive poem, Anisha ... beautifully written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 8/7/2023 2:23:00 PM
champagne "help" passion, enjoyed your beautiful and sensitive poem
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