Thirst For More

Thirst For More

Form new bridges, and dispel hardship elsewhere.
Costly moves break ties with a direct hit.
Enervate what's left of reminants along the way.
Keep nearer pastel roses of friendship.
Bemuse as oneself, would aspire with fresh roots.
Mend entitlement of a disconnected spirit.
Of brighter tomorrows, furnish to fit.
Stirs creativity of partly woes and endearment.

J.L.H.  11.26.11, rev 4.23.12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 2, 2012 at 3:00 PM
Nice work today, I came away having added my own mental lines between your lines..it felt like it would make a great duet poem! Light & Love
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April 24, 2012 at 10:48 AM
Very well written Jan, thank you for sharing your thoughts. - oxox Anne-Lise
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