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Thirst and Hunger

Thirsty people pushes on hungry people who stands up with his food trying to orderly use it. But thirst cannot be won by anything else than pure water and pure water is missing. Hungry people, on the other end, knows well that one cannot survive of  bread alone. It is a tragedy which goes beyond any hope.

Better than many words are only few
Better than words is intuition thought
Not all we see as picture is for true
To other things my mind is thus brought.

An image of poor world instantly I see
Looking for food and water all around
This pushes strongly what struggles me
Poverty is slavery and everywhere is found.

Bread isn’t enough to win the human need
There must be else for worth life receive
To a deepest culture man must then accede 
And a spiritual poetry should too conceive.

Thirst needs good water, not a fancy drink
For simple habits help to poverty overcome
This naive rule forces us to strongly think
That a real equality of beings has to come.

for Ekphrasis Contest 01

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2015 6:15:00 PM
Congrats on your winning wok!!Sara
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Mario De Paz
Date: 5/7/2015 9:37:00 AM
Hi Sara, it was a 5th place, but more than enough for my effort. It is kind of you to come and comment
Date: 5/6/2015 9:57:00 AM
Mario, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win in Giorgio's "Ekphrasis" poetry contest. Forever *SKAT*
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Mario De Paz
Date: 5/6/2015 10:35:00 AM
Thank you, Skat, it is always a pleasure to meet you here
Date: 5/5/2015 2:54:00 PM
Hello Mario, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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Mario De Paz
Date: 5/6/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thank you, Linda, the 5th place is even too much for my modest composition
Date: 5/1/2015 8:01:00 AM
So true; a well-penned poem.
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Mario De Paz
Date: 5/1/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thank you for coming and commenting

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