Thirst and Hunger

Thirsty people pushes on hungry people who stands up with his food trying to orderly use it. But thirst cannot be won by anything else than pure water and pure water is missing. Hungry people, on the other end, knows well that one cannot survive of  bread alone. It is a tragedy which goes beyond any hope.

Better than many words are only few
Better than words is intuition thought
Not all we see as picture is for true
To other things my mind is thus brought.

An image of poor world instantly I see
Looking for food and water all around
This pushes strongly what struggles me
Poverty is slavery and everywhere is found.

Bread isn’t enough to win the human need
There must be else for worth life receive
To a deepest culture man must then accede 
And a spiritual poetry should too conceive.

Thirst needs good water, not a fancy drink
For simple habits help to poverty overcome
This naive rule forces us to strongly think
That a real equality of beings has to come.

for Ekphrasis Contest 01
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 6:15 PM
Congrats on your winning wok!!Sara
De Paz Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Hi Sara, it was a 5th place, but more than enough for my effort. It is kind of you to come and comment
A  Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 9:57 AM
Mario, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win in Giorgio's "Ekphrasis" poetry contest. Forever *SKAT*
De Paz Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Thank you, Skat, it is always a pleasure to meet you here
A   Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 2:54 PM
Hello Mario, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
De Paz Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Thank you, Linda, the 5th place is even too much for my modest composition
Kiser Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 8:01 AM
So true; a well-penned poem.
De Paz Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Thank you for coming and commenting
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