Thirst

Lust
Fulfilled
Strains the soul
Drenches the minds
Thirst
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 28, 2009 at 1:37 PM
Interesting reflection captured in just five lines. I really like the 3rd and 4th lines. Thank you for your kind words on the poem that James and I wrote. It was a fun experience. Keep on writing! Have a nice day. Karen
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July 6, 2009 at 5:43 PM
Nicely done! Good luck in the contest! Laura :)
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July 6, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Great job with the lanterne form ! Nicely done!
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July 5, 2009 at 11:41 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Cecil.Rgds Brian
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July 5, 2009 at 10:05 PM
Very nice...Karla
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