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Thirst

Lust Fulfilled Strains the soul Drenches the minds Thirst

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/28/2009 1:37:00 PM
Interesting reflection captured in just five lines. I really like the 3rd and 4th lines. Thank you for your kind words on the poem that James and I wrote. It was a fun experience. Keep on writing! Have a nice day. Karen
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Date: 7/6/2009 5:43:00 PM
Nicely done! Good luck in the contest! Laura :)
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Date: 7/6/2009 8:22:00 AM
Great job with the lanterne form ! Nicely done!
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Date: 7/5/2009 11:41:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Cecil.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/5/2009 10:05:00 PM
Very nice...Karla
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