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thinner

the air feels thinner without you. my heart struggles to breath.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/21/2023 1:12:00 PM
Deeply emotive poem and you showed your pain in only a few words..
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Sarah Ann Jullion
Date: 11/21/2023 6:04:00 PM
Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment... Much appreciated!
Date: 11/20/2023 7:47:00 PM
potent and from the gut - well said
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Sarah Ann Jullion
Date: 11/21/2023 6:02:00 PM
Thanks for reading and for your comment... much appreciated.

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