thinner

the air feels   thinner
   without you.
my heart   struggles
   to breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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November 21, 2023 at 1:12 PM
Deeply emotive poem and you showed your pain in only a few words..
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November 21, 2023 at 6:04 PM
Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment... Much appreciated!
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