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Thinking With Clarity

Thinking with clarity not with austerity or vulgarity a propensity for hilarity and bipolarity She sat there thinking in which direction her life was heading not dreading the subheadings and the over-spreading of load shedding WORDS

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David Smith

Date: 2/25/2023 4:48:00 AM

So much to admire about this piece that could not be more relevant in today's fast paced world. You made it even more so by your clever use of words that focus the mind of the reader to its importance. Also you judged the length of this piece so well. Something that can make or break a poem. In getting it right you rather proved your point about clarity of thought. Regards David in NZ

Holly Bohto
Date: 5/9/2023 7:05:00 AM

Thank you David..

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/15/2021 7:17:00 AM

We need your poetry, Holly! sweet!

Holly Bohto
Date: 9/18/2021 10:59:00 PM

Thank you James. That is so sweet of you to say.

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/10/2021 6:03:00 AM

Excellent read! For sure, writing is therapy...it is also beautiful, honest expression -- which transcends any doubts when it comes our transformative reasons for existing.

Holly Bohto
Date: 9/10/2021 6:16:00 AM

Thanks joe...was gone off of poetry soup for a few years..severe writers block. It's coming back to me slowly so I really appreciate your commemt