Thinking With Clarity

Thinking with clarity
not with austerity
or vulgarity
a propensity
for hilarity
and
bipolarity
She sat there thinking
in which direction
her life was heading
not dreading
the subheadings
and the
over-spreading
of load shedding
   WORDS
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Smith Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 4:48 AM
So much to admire about this piece that could not be more relevant in today's fast paced world. You made it even more so by your clever use of words that focus the mind of the reader to its importance. Also you judged the length of this piece so well. Something that can make or break a poem. In getting it right you rather proved your point about clarity of thought. Regards David in NZ
Bohto Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 7:05 AM
Thank you David..
Goff Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 7:17 AM
We need your poetry, Holly! sweet!
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September 18, 2021 at 10:59 PM
Thank you James. That is so sweet of you to say.
DiMino Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 6:03 AM
Excellent read! For sure, writing is therapy...it is also beautiful, honest expression -- which transcends any doubts when it comes our transformative reasons for existing.
Bohto Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 6:16 AM
Thanks joe...was gone off of poetry soup for a few years..severe writers block. It's coming back to me slowly so I really appreciate your commemt
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